Story with a tentacle monster protagonist

Marlikton said:
I like your Doomsday type alien story the one thing that seems a bit off to me anyway "IF" this alien is supposed to basically be a breeding doomsday how come he's getting killed by rockets and helicopter fire? This is the creature that "killed" Superman and he's killed by bullets and rockets? Just seems to me that this alien has bark but is severely lacking in the bite...than again he is a lover not a fighter so far,
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Hopefully that didn't come out sounding like a complaint. I still like the story and looking forward to see where it goes.
 
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