Submission to Desires

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Alboe Interactive, Jun 6, 2020.

  1. Since I have completed the prologue, I'm looking for feedback on my story.

    Hopefully, I have piqued some reader's interest with the foreshadowing so far. If not, that's okay as well. I know this story isn't for everyone nor is it trying to be.

    Lastly, certain tags may be optional and the full list isn't final. For example, I included Butt Plug which I may expand to include Pegging as an option.

    Any constructive criticism and advice is welcome.
     
    Last edited: Jun 10, 2020