Tales from Xadia

SeriousBrainDamage

SeriousBrainDamage

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Hey guys,

as the title suggests this thread is about this story I recently started writing.

It is still in early development so I don't expect to be there enough material for it be actually rewied by anyone yet.
Also, I'm super-shy and overly critic already about my stuff, so be nice, I'm not here to show off or anything.

I just wanted to advertise to anyone interested in the franchise, it would be nice to have a second opinion on a few things.

I don't know it this will ever take wing properly, maybe the show it's just too niche or too new to have a substantial following, but I felt it was due.

If anyone wonders, I feel a little bad(not true, not true at all:oops:) to twist something which has this wholesome feeling stamped all over the place, yet in my defence, the thing was spoiled to me by a few doujinshi I came by in a totally unintentional way.
And well, once it was in my head, there was only one way to push it out.

I'm working on three lines at the moment. One about Rayla, one about Callum and one of them as a couple, set a few years later.
I have several more ideas, just sketched though, that I keep on halt to not get sidetracked so early.

In my intention, I plant to keep the mood as lighthearted as possible, but I could have a few problems as that's not my usual style, and that can be easily inferred by the development of the first line that leans dangerously towards non-con.
Still, I think I got by nicely up to now.

Suggestion, ideas and of course contribution are highly welcome.
 
I'm trying to steer the first line towards an aphrodisiac sex crazed throng v.s. willingly helpful girl kind of situation, for I feel it to be more in character for Rayla without having to break the whole situation with non-con.
There won't be penetrative sex for a while though.
 
I've started to lay down the tracks of the second storyline, the one involving Callum and Rayla as married couple.

The first place they will visit is the home of the Earthblood Elves, still missing from the original show. The story will focus on cheating/swinging/netorare with a seasoning of impregnation.
This is partly because I'm leaning towards the two of them not being able to procreate as nothing in the official canon up to now suggests the existence of half-breeds.

Link here
 
I'm planning on short/medium term to add two other storylines:

-One about Amaya and Janai as a couple and their desire to have a child, probably set in the +9yrs time frame
-One about Ezram about to marry with Aanya through an arranged marriage.

This second story may as well be split in two separate stories:

-One about Ezram bachelor's party
-One about Aanya attempting to flee from the marriage and possibly getting kidnapped by a rebel faction (still not sure)

On top of these, I'm still deciding how to use the two headed soulfang serpent, something I really want to one way or another.
My current solution is to have it make an appearance during Ezram party, and bite two random people in the confusion.

Alternatively, I could create a separate line/hub where I could add every possible soul swaps, even in different timelines. (This could get confusing though.)

The first couple I plan to soulswap at the moment are Callum & Ezram.
 
Hey, I guess I'll be keeping this kind of diary updated monthly for, uh, the posterity maybe?

Well, I guess that even if no one else read this, it will still serve me as a reference for the future.

So here's the stuff:

About The capture of Rayla

This was originally intended to have two or three main branches, splitting about when Claudia presented the way she was going to torture her prisoner.
The one I developed, is the least 'grim', the other two were meant to be darker and have much more lasting consequences on Rayla.

I intended to have Claudia plant in her some kind worm-like creature, like that of Aaravos, which would little by little increase her libido and ultimately turn her into an easily controllable fuck-toy.

The other one was intended to be a line gravitating around the fact that Claudia intended to break Rayla on her own. It was going to start as a lesbian make-out, but develop into either a strap-on or even a (magical)futa kind of situation.
(This one was the least defined of the three)

I decided to go with the one currently in development because I'm still in the process to find the right mood for this story, possibly akin to the original show, and I felt that those other situations would mess this up.

Still, since I was planning a Chapter 2 - maybe Arc 2 sounds better? - taking place a few weeks later, with Rayla free and Claudia trying to exploit what she did to her from the shadow to carry out her new master's plan, it is highly possible the parasite branch will be revived and used as 'canon' for Arc 1.

This current branch will end with a group sex situation. Actually, I'd like it to have a few slightly different (bad)ends and just one true end that will carry into the next arc.

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About An arcane doom

This is intended to be all about Callum learning illusion spells for now. No other Arcana are in development at the moment.
It will initially play out with Lujanne changing herself into other characters and having sex with her student.

Since there aren't that many characters to choose from, at the moment I'm writing of an unexpected fakecest with Lujanne taking the appearance of Sarai and exploiting Callum's mom issues.

After that, or alternatively (I'm still undecided), Callum will be changed by one of Lujanne spells reinforced by a pendant like Ava (Ellis' pet wolf), so that he can truly experience how appearance is the essence of form.

These two stories are intended to cross paths in Arc 2, as they take place roughly at the same time.


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About Married at last

This is taking more time than I anticipated. I lost myself in the needed worldbuilding.
Right now I'm kind of stuck because I can't decide what will be the Earthblood Elves 'power'.

My not-particularly-original ideas so far are:

-Heal, others or self
-Grow things, possibly exploitable in a kinky way:D
-Commune with their spirit beast or something and turn into some kind of beastman/woman/elf whatever for a limited amount of time.

About their culture, I'm going to depict them as obsessed with fertility, (whereas other Elves' natality rates are rather low normally), and very strict about social customs and traditions.
They are very close to the outside world, and generally rather ignorant and simple-minded.
They consider very highly the marital vows and monogamy, going as far as not having the concept of divorce in their culture.
They look down on homosexuality and masturbation and even anal sex, as they are seen as enemies of procreation.
In fact, homosexual marriages are not permitted.
Still, a blind eye is generally turned upon these kinds of relationships as long as they are treated as mere distractions and do not interfere with 'proper' ones.
(If you are feeling any Christian Church vibes, well, I really can't blame you, folks.)

As a vent valve for this kind of strict lifestyle, they have, once in a year a festival to celebrate fertility.
During this time, monogamy gets suspended.
The official excuse for this, is to increase the 'pollination' chance, as Elves tend to have 1/20th to 1/30th of Human's birthrates. This is balanced by their much longer life expectancy. (Up to 500yrs)
Eearthblood Elves' birthrates are close to 1/7th, making them the largest of the six Elf races.

This festival happens right when Rayla and Callum come for a visit, as you may imagine.

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Now, to all those who think I could have spent my time writing another chapter instead of all this nonsense, I say:


You, my friend, are definitely right.
 
SeriousBrainDamage said:
Hey guys,

as the title suggests this thread is about this story I recently started writing.

It is still in early development so I don't expect to be there enough material for it be actually rewied by anyone yet.
Also, I'm super-shy and overly critic already about my stuff, so be nice, I'm not here to show off or anything.

I just wanted to advertise to anyone interested in the franchise, it would be nice to have a second opinion on a few things.

I don't know it this will ever take wing properly, maybe the show it's just too niche or too new to have a substantial following, but I felt it was due.

If anyone wonders, I feel a little bad(not true, not true at all:oops:) to twist something which has this wholesome feeling stamped all over the place, yet in my defence, the thing was spoiled to me by a few doujinshi I came by in a totally unintentional way.
And well, once it was in my head, there was only one way to push it out.

I'm working on three lines at the moment. One about Rayla, one about Callum and one of them as a couple, set a few years later.
I have several more ideas, just sketched though, that I keep on halt to not get sidetracked so early.

In my intention, I plant to keep the mood as lighthearted as possible, but I could have a few problems as that's not my usual style, and that can be easily inferred by the development of the first line that leans dangerously towards non-con.
Still, I think I got by nicely up to now.

Suggestion, ideas and of course contribution are highly welcome.
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Hello, I was wondering if you are willing to write cheating south because I would really like to see Rayla secretly and happily cheating on Callum with Soren for purely lustful reasons like Soren having an attractive muscular body, has a way bigger dick, sexual stamina that last for days, and basically anything else sexual that makes Callum look pathetic at sex.
 
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