The Axe Effect [A first time poster on Forum]

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AxeEffect

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Dear All,

I posted a new story today which is two chapters deep. It's a teen story with hints of mind-control and potential incest [if the writer so wishes]

Looking for Co-Author/Authors to take on a thread. Why not check out my story and get in-touch.


https://chyoa.com/story/The-Axe-Effect.15607
 
I'd consider it, but sometimes its a bit boring seeing the one main character and his harem of girls who never clash cliche.

Your writing has a lot quality though i'd leave the character descriptions more generic as it distrupts the flow of the story. Also I don't like looking up alabaster to see what color it is.
 
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