The girl and the demon

B

Bregus

Virgin
Hi,

after watching a bit too much horror movies lately I had a idea:

Some college girl (maybe not the most popular one, more a shy, nerdy one) spends the day at the library and finds an ancient book. She reads it and accidental conjures a demon (maybe not the most powerful one, at least in the first place).
There is no way written down in the book to send the demon back to his realm so the demon stays there with her ... probably changing the girl's life a lot ... one idea was that his cum corrupts her more and more into a demon herself, maybe due to unknown heritage of her ... and of course he also goes for the other girls on the campus and in the city ...

One other idea I had (and not fully sure if good one) was that they scarifies some other girls to a soul-sucking god for additional powers ... turning the girls into mindless drones ... not sure abotu that ... they coudl also just build a harem of slaves ...

Maybe some of you have some thoughts on it.
Thanks B.
 
Not a new idea, or one that interests me, but I'm sure you will develop it in ways that others haven't...

Some suggestions though, just a few random thoughts:

1: What if the 'demon' isn't evil? (Perhaps he wanted to escape hell as much as anyone else would?)
2: What if the woman, finding she can't send him back, binds him to serve her?
3: If you go with the transformation angle, how does she transform? (Succubus? Tentacle monster? Futanari/Hermaphrodite?)
4: Harems are ridiculously overdone, be cautious...

Good luck!
 
Nemo of Utopia said:
(Perhaps he wanted to escape hell as much as anyone else would?)
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Depends on the definition of the hell. Or can you debauch and sin in heaven? ^^

Nemo of Utopia said:
1: What if the 'demon' isn't evil?
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That's a nice idea.
Could be even a demon who wants to change his life, finding out that it isn't that easy while he corrupts the girl.


I could also imagine that the demon would - like a classic devil - constantly try to make deals with her to make her life easier while he corrupts her. At the same time, he could be the reason that she would even need his help. Let's say she wants to sleep because she has exams on the next day but he insists to party with her. If she stays up, she would have some fun. If she wants to sleep, he doesn't let her sleep. Either way, she is tired and after the exam, she knows that she will fail. Then, the demon could offer her to change her answers, telling her "It's not cheating! We both know that you know the answers." but informs her about the downside that he can't do it without getting something in return - "demon bonds, you know". An early quid pro quo could be that she has to suck a cock and let it cum in her mouth. "It doesn't matter which one. I mean, you could even choose mine... but honestly, it doesn't matter. You only have to do it today!" After accepting the deal, he could try to distract her like "You really want to search for a guy in THAT rags? Oh well, you probably don't care if it's an ugly bum's cock." Depending on how much she lets him influence her, time could go by. The later it gets, the less her chances to find a handsome guy, ending up to choose between a more or less ugly/unwashed guy or the demon.
If you dance with the devil, the devil don't change. The devil changes you.
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If i were to do a demon story like that i woukd put the demin as being mischevious and not evil in the classic sense. For example maybe she wants to be popular and good looking and makes deals with the demon, every deal she makes and gets something, something else has to be given, could be a sexual favor to the demon itself or a sexual act on a classmate or teacher etc.
 
gene.sis said:
I could also imagine that the demon would - like a classic devil - constantly try to make deals with her to make her life easier while he corrupts her. At the same time, he could be the reason that she would even need his help. Let's say she wants to sleep because she has exams on the next day but he insists to party with her. If she stays up, she would have some fun. If she wants to sleep, he doesn't let her sleep. Either way, she is tired and after the exam, she knows that she will fail. Then, the demon could offer her to change her answers, telling her "It's not cheating! We both know that you know the answers." but informs her about the downside that he can't do it without getting something in return - "demon bonds, you know". An early quid pro quo could be that she has to suck a cock and let it cum in her mouth. "It doesn't matter which one. I mean, you could even choose mine... but honestly, it doesn't matter. You only have to do it today!" After accepting the deal, he could try to distract her like "You really want to search for a guy in THAT rags? Oh well, you probably don't care if it's an ugly bum's cock." Depending on how much she lets him influence her, time could go by. The later it gets, the less her chances to find a handsome guy, ending up to choose between a more or less ugly/unwashed guy or the demon.
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I like this idea, although I would personally tweak it so that the downfall was a little bit more the girl's fault. So, let's say, instead of the demon keeping the girl up all night and not letting her sleep, she herself chooses to stay up all night studying because she's so worried about the test. And, of course winds up too tired and messes up the test. THEN the demon could be like 'I can help fix it'.

I mean it's not a big change but I just find it more interesting when the character's own missteps lead to the demon gaining some kind of influence over her, rather than the demon manipulating the circumstances. Maybe that's just me being cynical...
 
Nemo of Utopia said:
Depends on your religions conception of heaven and/or sin, the Moslems have that whole "40 virgins" thing...
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Well... my life ends with my death... then there is just a little carbon which gets recycled quickly ;)
Damn! No more virgins for me -.-


JoeSte91 said:
I like this idea, although I would personally tweak it so that the downfall was a little bit more the girl's fault. So, let's say, instead of the demon keeping the girl up all night and not letting her sleep, she herself chooses to stay up all night studying because she's so worried about the test. And, of course winds up too tired and messes up the test. THEN the demon could be like 'I can help fix it'.
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I think she should have to decide between bad and worse, though it could be like your suggestion but maybe more subtle like "You should relax a little at a party... or do you really think, they will ask the name of the emperor's wife and the birth date of his younger brother?"... then she could give up and relax at a party, or panic, trying to find out every detail that wouldn't be part of the test...
 
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