The Tower of Voices Voting Thread

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by TheLeherengin, Mar 19, 2021.

  1. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    For the most part all of the floors are already planned though there are a few things I leave blank to fill in based on what seems to fit best with the current scenarios.
     
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  3. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    tsk, and here I tought the spider would be this floors boss. Guess we aren't out of the woods yet.

    Don't underestimate this guy just because he is naked. It looks like we are dealing with an Incubus, furthermore since you have choosen the more difficult path this one should be formidable

    Still, it's the first monster we can actually talk with, so we should do that first. Let's try bargaining with him and see if he wants something in exchange of letting you go.

    If he refuses cut his dick off and feed it to the goats.


    @engin i think it would be very helpful if you added the mana costs to the spells, as well a note if they are mastered or not. Otherwise it will get rather difficult to keep track of it.
     
  4. TheLeherengin

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    Yeah I was actually thinking that myself. I'll go back and add that.
     
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  5. warider

    warider Experienced

    All right, so the boss is not optional.

    My fighting strategy for you would be to stay light on your feet and try and make as many cuts and holes with your rapier as possible. Don't try and finish him with the rapier, just open wounds on him. Then once he has a good amount, splash the spider venom on him like your spraying venomous holy water over a crowd. If that venom gets in his wounds it may weaken or just out right kill him. I believe you can outlast him in a fist/claw fight, use your healing spells to survive. You may have been given a buff to your strength for this floor, but I would still suggest not getting grappled by the demon. Take hits if it means keeping yourself at prime poking distance.

    After listening to this guy I wouldn't suggest talking, seems he's more of a take what I want kind of demon. He has wings that probably work to some degree so the poison gas grenades probably won't do too much. If you think your fast enough to pull out an adrenaline syringe to speed you up go for it, Speed is Key.

    Don't let this guy get to you, you're on a very important mission to save so many lives. You can do it! And hey, worst case at least he won't kill you...
     
  6. The-Blue-Heretic

    The-Blue-Heretic Experienced

    I want to preface this by saying, I love your writing and this isn't a bad thing, "pointed at her like a threat" made me laugh.

    You have this Yulia! Stay light on your toes! Attack and pull back to dodge as soon as your attack lands, even if it doesn't hit him and move back. Do not linger to hurt nearby him for too long! Once you're satisfied, do like the other voice says, splash some spider venom on him! Get him to his knees! Then, once he's on his knees, kill him like the sweet angel you are! You're the best honey and I believe in you, and if I've learned anything, assholes talk big, don't let him get to you!

    Dev?

    Damn I'm torn, I love demons, but there is no way I'm turning poor Yulia into a cum-dump. I hope she wins.
     
  7. DeviantChalice

    DeviantChalice Really Experienced

    Lunge right at him and run him through. I'm sure you're faster than him. What could go wrong?
     
  8. The-Blue-Heretic

    The-Blue-Heretic Experienced

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  9. moonblack

    moonblack CHYOA Guru

    I don't have much to add to what my colleagues already suggested. Have faith in yourself and in your abilities, Yulia. Keep moving to make yourself a more difficult target and don't hesitate to attack this guy's dick if you get the chance - that seems like the easiest weak spot to attack. Good lcuk! You can do this!
     
  10. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Ooh awesome art. Yeah colours are wrong, but still I'm super grateful for the art :D
     
  11. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Next Post: Exorcism

    and once again the difference between victory and defeat was a single point... Made even worse by the fact that this time Yulia actually managed to have a ton of advantages.
     
  12. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Stupid Inccubus should have taken the offer.

    Damn, if this keeps going like this you end up becoming Doom Slayer. Shame the demon didn't drop anything tough.

    Good work so far. This floor was tough, next floor will be even tougher. We will get you trough it.

    I noticed to coin key is missing from the inventory. I imagine that is just a bit of housekeeping and useless items will get discarded as you progress, but tought i bring it up anyways.

    @engin "the adrenaline has temporarily negated her decreased physical capabilities" this line confuses me a bit, shouldn't Yulia's capabilities be increased due to the chicken buff?
     
  13. moonblack

    moonblack CHYOA Guru

    Great job, Yulia! That's another boss down and another floor completed! Now onward to the angel path!

    Maybe you should have taken a short break and masturbated to take care of your arousal... oh, well, you can do that on the next floor if you are still horny when you get there.
     
  14. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Yes the chicken did increase her physical capabilities, that line was in reference to her normally being sickly and physically weaker than average, the adrenaline temporarily negates her basic weakness, essentially she started out automatically with a physical debuff and the adrenaline temporarily negates that on top of also buffing her physical capabilities.
     
  15. warider

    warider Experienced

    Great job! How did you feel like you did in that combat?

    Anything bothering you or need to get off your chest?

    So what kind of technology did you have in your world or is it all magic?
     
  16. The-Blue-Heretic

    The-Blue-Heretic Experienced

    Poor Yulia! You won, but you've definitely suffered some, "setbacks."
    Demons are something of a favorite of mine, behind orcs.
    So I can't blame you, but I suspect some foul lust magic was at play, and not your secret kinks.
    Let's try our best to find a place to rest the minute you get upstairs.
    I know you'll press forwards and triumph like you always do, such a good girl.
     
  17. The-Blue-Heretic

    The-Blue-Heretic Experienced

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  18. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Definitely better representation. Looks great. Do I have your permission to use it on her character sheet?
     
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  20. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    It does not appear you have achieved any debuff from the fight with the Incubus, so this is just normal arousal. Deal with it.

    Eh, Demons aren't that bad. They are certainly no Lizards, Bloody Lizards....


    Oh greath, the angel path isn't screwing around, ey?

    Alright, I don't see your rapier being of much use here, the same goes for your icicle. You could try to make a dash for the door, but we have no idea what awaits you beyond here.

    You could just take the flagellation. From the sound of it this will go on until you stop being horny. You have plenty of mana left to heal, if things get dicey

    Yeah, I'd say get whipped here. Might be a good opportunity to raise your pain tolerance.
     
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