The W.H.O.R.E. -Project

[puppywhore]

So after playing the amazing" S.L.U.T. Academy", and realizing that it updates as frequent as "yugioh the abridged series", i have decided that instead of complaining, it would be much wiser to do something about it myself.
So it is pretty much the same concept as with the "S.L.U.T. Academy", but to spice things up a little i thought it would be fun for it to take place in the Harry Potter universe. This reason is two fold, one i have yet to discover a good CYOA set in this universe, which i find kinda sad. Two the story will not be bound by some sci-fi element like in S.L.U.T. "Academy".
So what are some of the pitfalls i should look out for when writing, in this universe? What are your turn offs about this?

Lastly i thought about using images, and i think i might sneak myself to use some of Akabur's art, and if he end up complaining about it i will have to find something else.

Still developing the idea, but if some of you would like to trade ideas please do send me a message

 

[puppywhore]

So made a small demo in TWINE, don't really know if i should continue or not. it is not long but have some coding that i have never used before. What do you guys think?
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[Peri2g]

This really is from a while back. I remember seeing this on TFgamessite a while ago, and giving the demo a shot. I really enjoyed it. Story content was pretty light, but it was filled with some great demeaning dom sub eroticism. The game that I recall was pretty short, so I don't know if you've added onto it since then. In any event I would encourage you to continue, I think you write very well, and have a good mind for setting up scenes and scenarios. From what I recall, I would love to see more character interaction. That's my biggest problem with a lot of the stories I read. People exist only as auxiliaries to the erotic content... Which, I know that's sort of like saying you read playboy for the articles, but I don't see why it can't be done, and I think you have a good platform to do it with. Harry Potter, for all the things that it wasn't did have a fun story and memorable characters. If you're emulating the veneer, then you have a ton of great archetypes to build from.

 

[puppywhore]

I would love to continue the story (And think i have done since the first release if that's the one you read), Though it have died a lot since there wasn't that much excitement behind it. I enjoy doing these 'games', but in reality i can only push so far myself, until i need some input. The sad thing is that there wasn't much behind this here to the last. Maybe i will make another update some day or maybe i will let it rest in piece i really don't know.