Those Damned Dogs

[LizardGod]

So I have been thinking about this story for awhile now and realised that I have never actually gotten around to posting it here in the feedback forum.

I have been thinking about stripping out the, admittadly minimal, branching and turn this into a normal story.

I kind of also wish I had not allowed you to read two of the later chapters in either order, since I now think they work better when you read the "nice" chapter first(You will know them when you get to them).

But yeah, otherwise I am curious what people thought of it.

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Those-Damned-Dogs.332575

 

[Nemo of Utopia]

I'm not entirely sure this thread should exist, given that I believe Black Hollow already has a thread, but, I'm not confident enough that it ISN'T permitted to press the report button either, especially since Black Hollow appears to be one of those "shared universes" types stories, where different threads have nothing in common except a general location or theme.

I've read the story in question down to THIS chapter, but no further, because I'm not really a horror fan at the best of times, (if I want that feeling I watch the news: ) but the parts I did read were very good, I especially liked your attention to detail and still more especially the scene where the protagonist walks in on the coroner...

 

[LizardGod]

Yah I decided to split it off since those are all kinda there own things. Hell, the three that I have done for that story have been very very different.

I guess it makes sense that I would also write an erotic coupling story in a "horror" story.