Training Meghan

[Shandy]

https://chyoa.com/story/training-meghan/cover

I'm interested in getting some feedback on this. What people like, don't like, and any suggestions.

 

[Torg]

I'm in love with this story. You've written a ton of stuff in a very short time. I'm hoping to add some threads to this.

I really like that the MC and the grandfather have a past.

 

[Shandy]

Thanks. Look forward to seeing threads from you.

I've tried to leave a lot of branch points so people (or me) can take things in various directions.

 

[Torg]

I'm working on a few possibilities.

 

[Shandy]

Saw that you edited your thread. I hope this is a precursor to further additions.

 

[Torg]

I've been so busy reading your new threads that I've been too drained to write.

Actually, I'm still thinking about what I want to write.

 

[Torg]

I hope my additions have been fun and sexy. I love the many directions you've gone in a short amount of time. And the variety of characters. I don't know if I'll ever get out of the sorority soiree.