Ye Olde Ren Faire

Zekar

Zekar

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Just published Ye Olde Ren Faire.

Please post any feedback or comments here.

It's just started so suggestions and contributions are appreciated as I start writing.

Current Story Branches
  • Together
    • Gown/Corset Shopping
      • Kat turned into buxom maiden.
        • Sheriff Nisha arrests Rich
          • Escape
        • Cleavage day!
        • Rich turned into Regina
    • Lover's Glade

Suggestions:
lordsomno
Nice start! Kat buys clothes that show a lot of her sizable bosom. She puts the dress and removes everything underneath. She was encouraged by the woman who sold her the dress to do so.
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Finished: "No, Kat is being Odd"

lordsomno
Great start! Hopefully, as they walk around the festival, Rich finds that women all over the festival are letting him look down (and sometimes up!) their dresses, and his wife is letting men (and women!) look down her dress.
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Finished: "Cleavage Day!"

Ennui
I'm curious how Regina seems to know Madame Taylor, and if this thread will have the possibility of them escaping the Faire?
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Ennui
I'm curious how the pants will effect him, part of me is guessing magically enhanced dick, put another part just thinks he'll be crazy good at Irish jigs or some other kind of dancing, and maybe woe some maidens at a ball
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Just finished reading the opening chapters. Nice start that got me curious where the story might go.

Not much else to say for now.
 
Finished and liked what I've read so far(4 chapters to date).Enjoying the slow build-up as I posted and can hardly wait for the main scenario to begin
 
Thank you guys for enjoying it so far. I'm aiming to hammer out some more tomorrow.

A question I have is should I use photos for the costumes? Finding pictures of Ren Faire garb is easy. The trouble is finding sexy gowns so far.
 
Not a huge fan of photos myself but if you believe it will enhance the storytelling better than descriptive word then go picture crazy!
 
Kat's Sexy Red Gown, Story Branch finished:
Rich has a plan

I will be adding dead end chapters to each of the branches with one "Good" ending.

After this I will be expanding upon the Lover's Glade story arc which will involve transformation into Nymph and Satyr as well as a love spell havok. I don't see this arc lasting as long as te initial one so I may branch out into a Belly Dancer arc.

Please like and book mark chapters. That tells me that there is interest.

Also keep requests coming as they really help get my creative juices flowing.

Any contributions are welcomed as well.
 
Shout out to Noah_Peal for pointing out my mistakes in Chapter 1. The names for the main characters have been corrected to match the rest of the story.
 
I'm calling out for more contributions.

I won't be able to add any more chapters till 10/10/16. I will be able to review additional chapters once a day.
 
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