Those would be really great scenes. Gavin having sex with Hannah will be really great and hot. The only way it could get better, would be if Gavin had a threesome with Heather (as his girlfirend) and Hannah, which i don't think would to much of a strech considering how the girls are.
Was running a few simulations of the story in my mind, I'm starting to see the merit in Gavin being the one helping Heather with the club, or whatever shape that idea takes, kind of like getting swept away in all the sex at first, and then trying to get Heather to shut it down once it gets out of hand. Another issue is that, unless Zack is the one dating Vicky when she gets interested in the club, his plot might very well unfold completely separated from the rest of the story, found no link at all besides this potential Vicky one. Lastly, I still can't find things for Brandon and Ashley to do. If this doesn't change, I might scrap the club idea and just go with an improved version of the story that already exists.
How about this. Zack is dating Victoria at the start of the story and they both enter the sex club that Heather starts with Gavin's help. Ashley being friends with Heather and Gavin's half-sister gets an invitation to the club along with Brandon. Over time Chloe and maybe Lisa also join the club. Ashley is a mix between her regular self and the version from boomer97's thread, while Brandon is a combination between a good guy and a jerk when it comes to sex (like you suggested). Over time, Vicky gets to spend more time in the club with Brandon which leads to (some) tension between Ashley and Brandon and which finally lets to Zack and Vicky breaking up. Zack ends up getting consoled by Chloe, which leads to the two of them starting a relationship or Lisa and Chloe is a lesbian and in a relationship with Nikki. Towards the end of the sex club Vicky has a moment of clarity and decides to get out and take some time off and Gavin helps Heather close the sex club and to ensure that it's members don't say anything to anyone. After experimenting with various people Ashley and Brandon stay together, Gavin and Heather start a serious relationship in which they might add Vicky (or she might join Ashley and Brandon from time to time).
I'm not sure, I think the club idea might hinder the story's progression, I can very well hit a wall somewhere and get forced to restart, something I don't want to do again. About how the story would start without the club aspect, I was thinking about Zack dating Lisa and Gavin dating a random girl, but they break up almost at the same time, Zack because of his interest in Vicky that Lisa finds outs, and Gavin because of something Hannah do that scares off his girlfriend. Zack then gets closer to Vicky and they start to date, while Gavin and Heather start hang out more and hook up. Then, at some point, before Zack and Vicky even start fooling around with each other, she somehow ends up in bed with Gavin and Heather, either by seduction, chance or whatever. Zack breaks up with her and starts living a bit more freely while Chloe tries to make him turn back to his true self ( this is where I'd fit in the affair with Ms. Moreau and other hook-ups). On the Gavin side of things, Heather starts finding out things even more crazy for them to do and that causes him to try and hold her back. Notice that there is no Brandon or Ashley on this, I'd have to find things for them to do.
It has a lot of potential and it could lead to some very interesting and crazy scenes. Especially post Victoria having a threesome with Gavin and Heather and Zack living more freely with Chloe trying to turn him back, which could lead to Zack and Chloe entering a relationship. It would also be interesting to see what will Heather come up with and how will Gavin manage to hold her back and if they will remain in a serious relationship or if they will remain friends with benefits or break up. It will also be interesting to see if Zack and Gavin will manage to repair their friendship. As for Brandon and Ashley, i can't think of anything yet. And i agree, the club idea is interesting but you could hit a lot of walls on the way and might have to start again.
Zack and Gavin will eventually manage to repair their friendship, since the thing with Victoria will be Heather's idea, and the first sign to Gavin that she's been heading down a dangerous path. One more minor change I think it can be interesting is to have Zack, Chloe and Gavin befriending each other at the same time, when all three of them are one or two-years old, as opposed to how it is now with Zack and Chloe meeting first and then Gavin a few years down the line; this will put the three of them in more equal footing on their friendship and Chloe can serve as some sort of bridge between the boys after the Victoria debacle.
Might have to come up with a bigger plot to tie all the stories around it, even if I was trying to avoid this. In At the Cabin, even without the bear costumes/thieves plot, we still had the trip by itself and the whole "live with each other in tight quarters" to make the story go forward, but in Azure Rocks Chronicles, without this larger plot, I only have a bunch of disconnected parallel stories floating around so far.
Mulling over it, I'm guessing that introducing a plot to tie the characters around probably won't hurt the story, maybe something like the already introduced underground sex club, but smaller than what I planned for the original version of the story. The story will probably revolve around Zack, Gavin and Brandon's adventures, and they will most likely run separated from each other, with the larger plot being what ties their stories together. Only thing I'm not too much sure about right now is Zack's end pairing (Chloe, Lisa or Ashley).
The idea sounds very interesting and it has a lot of potential. This way, every character can have their own adventure and when their paths intersect they can have bigger, more complex scenes. Also, we get to see the story from different perspectives. As for Zack's end pairing i would say Chloe; he has already been with Lisa in different threads and i believe also with Ashley. I imagine that this means that Gavin will end up with Heather or Victoria and Brandon with Victoria or Heather? Or maybe Lisa?
Zack's been with everyone in different threads, but he only ended either with Victoria (my branch), or dead/missing (Cretan_Bull14's branches). I believe that, of the three, Lisa is the strongest character, but Chloe has a deeper connection with Zack. The problem with Chloe is that, while I'm definitely planning on them hooking up during the story, I'm not seeing them together by the end yet. About Ashley, I'm struggling to find something for her to do, hence why I was thinking of leaving her with Zack, but maybe she would have to undergo a makeover first (one thing that crossed my mind was, since she's Gavin's half sister here, he could have gotten her interested on computers at an early age, and while he used it for gaming and researching, Ashley could have acquired hacking skills; not sure about this, though, just a possibility so far). As for Gavin and Brandon, I'm working with Heather and Victoria as their pairings, respectively.
Personally I have never had much interest in Lisa. Dont really know why. Maybe because she first was an "outsider" and barely in the story in the beginning. Also her being Zack's ex, I never had a desire for them getting back together. With Chloe I dont dislike the idea of her being with Zack, but I mostly prefer it when she gets together with someone else, like Gavin, Kurt or Brandon. Guess Im not the biggest fan of the best friends finally becoming a couple. So personally I would prefer Ashley with Zack, but thats just my opinion.
That was how I viewed Lisa at first, she was just there for plot purposes, being Zack's ex and all, but when I started writing her in the other versions of Azure Rocks Chronicles, I began seeing her potential as a character. I guess I never truly had the chance to write her as I really see her, except for a few brief moments in ARC, a no-nonsense kind of girl who doesn't put up with shit from anyone and can turn into a fiery horny vixen for Zack if he's focused on her. To me, she's on par with the other four girls in terms of importance. I'm looking at a few characters for Zack's endgame pairing (Lisa, Ashley and Chloe, maybe Madison now that I think about it), I want to pick the one which I believe will be a nice partner for the main character and provide the best possible story too. On another matter, I think I figured how Hannah is going to make Gavin break up with his initial girlfriend. It's a bit heavy, but I believe it can be a good jumping point for Gavin to be with a girl like Heather later. Taylor and Hannah (and a guy that serves as her fuck-buddy) will be in town for Zack and Brandon's game, then after the game, Gavin will take his girlfriend to the Woodsen's house to introduce her to Hannah (his older half-sister) in this version. Hannah then seduces the girl into a threeway with her guy, and later tells Gavin it was all a test that his girlfriend failed, she doesn't want to let people susceptible to seduction to date her younger siblings and will then encourage him to pursue a stronger-willed girl.
Alright, I believe I've made a breakthrough last night and was able to plan almost the whole story fairly quickly. Just a few minor details to decide, and Zack's end pairing, but the way I've built the story, I won't need to decide this until the last few scenes. I'll probably start to write this soon, as soon as I can define those minor details I mentioned. What I can tell about the actual story, the Heather's sex club idea is back, I figured out a good way of doing it in a way that it can drive the plot forward, although it will only come up towards the middle of the story. The beginning of the story will feel a bit like the previous version of Azure Rocks Chronicles, since I will recycle a few scenes, but not too many scenes. It will be a chaptered story, not chapters as in Chyoa's pages, but a group of threads that, together, form a chapter; and according to my rough draft, it will have about twenty chapters. I'll always write a complete chapter before posting, I think it'll be better this way.
A quick update on Zack's end pairing for the new branch; with the storyline I ended up with, it'll probably be either Victoria (again, lol) or a new version of Madison I'm creating, they were the ones who fit better with the story I'm building. Funny thing was that I was planning for Vicky to be Brandon's pairing this time, but I hadn't set it in stone yet.
I think I'll have to create a new story instead of just starting a new branch. The details of a few characters are a bit different, and the synopsis is different than Azure Rocks Chronicles'. I started writing it a couple of hours ago, maybe I can finish the opening thread and submit it today or tomorrow, at least. Still don't know if I'll call it "The Sex Club" or "Azure Rocks Sex Club" or even something with a bit more flair, like "The Pleasure Club" or "The Debauchery Club".
Sounds great. Good luck. Maybe you can name the story "Azure Rocks Mile High", if the town is situated in a mountainous region and at an elevetion of at least one mile, with the proper name of the school being Azure Rocks High Happy writing.
Never thought about Azure Rocks' elevation, but mountains are more common towards Silver Lake Park, not so much around Azure Rocks. Mile High usually makes us think about planes, almost everyone who clicks the story would expect it to be about planes. Since the main feature of the story will be the sex club, I was thinking that either "The Pleasure Club" or "The Debauchery Club" would sound cool.
