Tales of Silver Lake

Yeah, there's many ways the story could play out; Josh and Alice (or Devon and Tara) deciding on a mutual agreement to have fun with other people, or getting caught up in other people without an agreement as your synopsis suggests, or even Alice (or Tara) cheating, as was my intent. There's the potential for an incest storyline involving Josh and Diane, lesbian pairings, etc.
 
wanted to comment on something. many of the chapters take a cookie cutter approach, it changes over time. it bugged me a little worried it would become boring, but the reason for that is that if the shape changes, it means something
 
Also apology for getting around to submitting chapters so late. I spent most of morning/afternoon simulating new chapters, trying to find the place to go into the finish. I refused to cheat, as tempting as it was. I may use an earlier chapter (last chapter i ran was super boring and I didn't want to kep going), but to the end stayed true to the rules I set
 
Sometimes you can't avoid taking a simpler approach, kind of when one of the guys has to give a drink to one of the other guys.

You can simulate new paths once you finish the first one if you don't like it that much, that's one of the great things about this system.
 
Duskford said:
Sometimes you can't avoid taking a simpler approach, kind of when one of the guys has to give a drink to one of the other guys.

You can simulate new paths once you finish the first one if you don't like it that much, that's one of the great things about this system.
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Yeah I've got a couple of really good places to end it, I was just hoping to find a better one.
 
Deviating from the current discussion a bit, something I posted on 'The Azure Dungeon' thread kind of gave me an idea for a series of threads for this story. A bunch of short stories, each one starring one of the girls of the cabin gang, in a really hardcore scene. For example, Heather goes to the cabin for the weekend with her father, Leah and one or two of Robert's business partners and end up fucking her dad's friend(s). There would be other entries featuring the other girls, if anyone wants to give suggestions for hardcore scenes with them.
 
henrytemp said:
Yeah I've got a couple of really good places to end it, I was just hoping to find a better one.
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A curiosity about this group of characters; there was a character I was planning to include but ended up cutting her at the last minute, a younger sister for Alice. She would be twenty-two, only a year younger than Alice, don't remember why I cut her off the story.
 
Update. going to continue editing throughout the day as I can, hoping to publish first ending tonight. Currently going back to add to Round 48 based on Duskford's suggestion.
 
henrytemp said:
Update. going to continue editing throughout the day as I can, hoping to publish first ending tonight. Currently going back to add to Round 48 based on Duskford's suggestion.
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It's being a lot of fun, I'm gonna wait for your endings and try to add a path myself.

Another curiosity I never mentioned. Josh and Diane are Zack and Taylor's cousins. Their father is a brother to Zack and Tay's mom.
 
I have 3 ideas for endings, 2 of which I will do for sure, though I may take a break between 1st and 2nd. No clue if i'll do the 3rd.

1. Controlled ending- the game comes to a conclusion then is followed up by a series of scenes based on what happened during the game

2. Orgy ending- pretty self explanatory

3. Never ending game- I didn't even think of this until yesterday, but instead of it becoming a free for all, you just up the ante and introduce sex acts.

Another idea I considered, but didn't use was introducing the jokers into the game, with the idea that if one person draws a joker they lose an item of clothing. If both jokers are drawn, high card can give them a dare. When I do this in the College Leadership story I plan to add that to move the game along (also counting socks and shoes as I item each)

UPDATE: 11 chapters to the end of the game left. These are going a lot slower as I try to make the removal of important clothing feel important. I just loaded round 58 and it's awful. Still pushing to finish tonight but we'll see.
 
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All three endings sound like a nice way to finish the story. The number 2 can be a consequence of number 3, though, I guess, they start doing sex acts, and after a number of rounds, everyone is too horny and an orgy breaks out.
 
Duskford said:
Deviating from the current discussion a bit, something I posted on 'The Azure Dungeon' thread kind of gave me an idea for a series of threads for this story. A bunch of short stories, each one starring one of the girls of the cabin gang, in a really hardcore scene. For example, Heather goes to the cabin for the weekend with her father, Leah and one or two of Robert's business partners and end up fucking her dad's friend(s). There would be other entries featuring the other girls, if anyone wants to give suggestions for hardcore scenes with them.
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I really like this idea and was thinking on it earlier. If I'm not going to finish my at the cabin story, I might use this to dive in and do some of the stories I wanted to do- like the Susan-Colin-Lisa love triangle
 
Yeah, the idea is to do short scenes you might want to write but don't have the time or patience to get there in a longer story, or even a kinkier scene you might have thought about that doesn't fit any storyline.
 
editing round 67 right now. this is a big one. last major chapter before I head into the finish

UPDATE: final update for the night. I originally thought round 64 would be the end. I ran a few more rounds, just writing out bare bones outlines. round 67 begins, but needs a ton of work. Important chapter. going to write it tonight but wait until tomorrow to edit and submit. It will be later in the day, so look for later tomorrow night for the final parts of the story
 
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Since I'm a bit ahead of schedule on The Azure Dungeon, and I found my deck of cards, I'm gonna try posting a path today, let's see how different from yours it turns out.
 
plugging way at round 67, hoped to have it finished. If I don't publish tonight it's because i'm too tired to trust myself on the editing
 
final rounds posted, along with the first sex scene. just waiting on approval. with the game ending low-key I wanted to have the 1st one ready to go before I published. have 3 more scenes planned. Will write the next one tonight, not sure on the others. One guy gets left out so planning maybe a special scene for him the next day.

not to spoil but one scene I won't do in this grouping is Lily/Josh. However I originally ended the game after Lily stripped him, and so I've written another scene to branch off of that that could lead to a lily/josh scene
 
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henrytemp said:
final rounds posted, along with the first sex scene. just waiting on approval. with the game ending low-key I wanted to have the 1st one ready to go before I published. have 3 more scenes planned. Will write the next one tonight, not sure on the others. One guy gets left out so planning maybe a special scene for him the next day.

not to spoil but one scene I won't do in this grouping is Lily/Josh. However I originally ended the game after Lily stripped him, and so I've written another scene to branch off of that that could lead to a lily/josh scene
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It was a good ending, more on the vanilla side, you can use the alternate ones to get wilder, such as the neverending game or the orgy you were talking about. Josh/Lily is like an alternate canon pairing, it can be good in a path where Alice does something she shouldn't have and the engagement gets called off or Josh being the one who cheats, with Lily.
 
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It was a good ending, more on the vanilla side, you can use the alternate ones to get wilder, such as the neverending game or the orgy you were talking about. Josh/Lily is like an alternate canon pairing, it can be good in a path where Alice does something she shouldn't have and the engagement gets called off or Josh being the one who cheats, with Lily.
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Yeah it was vanilla. when you read what I just posted you'll understand why i went that direction. As I neared the end this story came to me.

I'm going to take a little break now. The next chapter is the most difficult for me- Diane sneaking off to Sharon. The only thing I have so far is a "Round 69" joke/reference
 
henrytemp said:
Yeah it was vanilla. when you read what I just posted you'll understand why i went that direction. As I neared the end this story came to me.

I'm going to take a little break now. The next chapter is the most difficult for me- Diane sneaking off to Sharon. The only thing I have so far is a "Round 69" joke/reference
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Enjoyed the Josh/Alice and the Sean/Tara scenes, they were really good. With drunk Devon out of the picture, we have Diane/Sharon as you said, and then there's Lily and Kevin left. Will you do something with those last two as well?
 
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