When I move to the next phase of the story arc, where either Eric visits one of the strip clubs, or one of the dancers visits him at his dayjob, I wonder if I should have either the girls make a move, because time has passed? Or does he stalk a dancer or two first, then roll from there?
dearnise, if Eric stalks a dancer or two, then roll for it. On a miss, have the girls' move include time passing. Even on a 7-9, the "cost" might be that time passes. Or, if Eric just hangs out, goes to work, etc, then time passes and the girls make a move.
Toying with writing up Mary Forbes as a PC. I brought in Mary as an NPC in Torg's Tom Jackson game, where Taylor tells her brother Tom that she's gotten really good at cunnilingus by going down on her working mom with traveling husband and college-age daughters / secret lesbian co-worker Mary from the diner. Here are a few possible spins on Mary. Mary Forbes (Hottie, +1 Hot = -1 Hard, +2 Hot, +1 Cool, -1 Control) Moves: Incest, Submissive (Taylor Jackson, nineteen-year-old hot blonde co-worker at the diner, with sister Madison and brother Tom). Taylor caught you after closing time at the diner as you were giving Mandy the cook a deep good-night kiss on her female parts. Taylor talked you into showing her how ladies give and get pleasure with each other, and now you have a standing Sunday date after church to eat each other for lunch. Now Taylor's told you about her brother Tom and how she went down on his irresistible big cock. The very notion of seeing them together makes you blush, but, praying forgiveness for your frailty, you want to see them together. Thinking of Taylor and her college-boy brother sets your mind spinning about your own girls and when they'll next be back from college. And Taylor has a younger sister, too... Mary Forbes (Tease, +1 Cool = -1 Hard, +3 Hot, 0 Cool, -1 Control) Moves: Mind Control (dominate with Hot), Mistress (XP on +cool 10+ from making other girls have sex). Something about you just drives people crazy. You don't know how you do it. You pull up your hair severely, dress down, you speak politely and properly, but somehow boys and girls just keep sniffing at the back of your skirt and losing themselves in your cleavage. A cheerful little remark about how pretty Taylor and Mandy were looking that evening, and at the end of the shift, they were all over each other in the pantry. It's a good thing your husband is so understanding. He loves hearing you tell him about your adventures over the phone while he's away from home on his long-distance trucking job. Mary Forbes (Cutie, +1 Hot = -1 Hard, +2 Hot, -1 Cool, +1 Control) Moves: Lesbian (+1 to get girl with you or another girl), Incest (+1 XP first time with another family member) "Don't ask, don't tell" came too late for you, so when you were discharged from the army for being caught eating out your bunkmate, you had a hard couple years until you met Brian Forbes at church. You tearfully confessed all your shortcomings to him, and not only did he forgive you, he loved you all the more. He shared that his first lover had been his big sister, and that they still knew each other -- Biblically -- now and then. You've had a happy home together now for twenty years, with two beautiful daughters just starting to make their own way, and two lesbian lovers at work -- Mandy the cook, and Taylor Jackson, a nineteen-year-old who begged you to teach her about women together. Your husband knows and blesses your relationship with Mandy, but he doesn't know about Taylor yet. And he doesn't know about the nude selfies you found on your daughters' phones and made copies of for yourself. You really hope your girls are getting a good start. You may have to have a talk with them.
Done, sir. Reading the other Variant Rules / Female PC stories makes me fear that Mary Forbes may be wandering into a movie where lusty tentacle monsters and sex kidnappers in black cars with tinted windows invade her small town. I don't think I'll do it, but someone else could certainly take the story that way. (Now I'm reminded of RobinRestless's Archie: Awakening in Riverdale: Archie Comics' hometown goes bad, but mostly in a fun way).
Zingiber, part of why I'm so excited for your Mary Forbes story is that I know you'll do something very different with those rules than what Ayumi is doing (or what I would do). Just because the rules include tentacle monsters and forced sex, don't feel that your story has to.
I figure I won't, but I kind of hope someone else will branch off Mary's story into a psychotronic sex movie where she'll end up as Queen of the UFO Invaders or something.
I'm open to ideas for both a Valentine's Day section & a "Spring Break" section of my Eric Antonelle story. Right now, for the Valentine's Day section, I'm thinking of a mix of traditional dinner or doing something fun with the dancers he's been seeing; details can vary with the dancer in question. Whether it leads to sex or not, can be determined with the roll of a dice, but this will be a 1-on-1 thing. Unlike the previous section, where I did various things with each of the dancer he's seen, this will only be a select amount of dancers. Currently, I have ideas for: Mia, Jessica, Jaina, Nadia (more than likely a Mardi-Gras theme), and Michelle (for a Chinese New Year theme). I'm open for ideas for other dancers. The main part of my upcoming "Spring Break" arc will likely be centered around him doing something fun for a week with a dancer, or a group of them. This is what I have in mind right now: Eric can go to a major comic convention with Mia, Abbie, & Chrissy cosplaying. Michelle & the Japanese twins can also be included. Eric can either spend a week in Brazil with Nadia, or in a Mexican Paradise with Jessica and/or Crystal, or tour Europe with Lana. Eric can spend some time at a Renaissance Faire with Kiana & Siba. Eric can travel with Candice (& maybe Charmaine, too) as she travels with her favorite basketball team, on their road trip. Eric can go on a motorcycle road trip with Jaina. If you guys have ideas, then let me know.
The theme vacations sound like a cute idea. I like the ones you've suggested. I could imagine a cruise ship / island hopping vacation as another possibility.
Zingiber, currently there is no move for when your female PC gets eaten out. There is the basic move "when you eat her out", and the character move Mistress ("When you make a girl go down"), but I can't believe I didn't include a move for the PC getting eaten out. I would think it should be a character move, and would be a lot like the basic eat her move. When you get eaten out, roll +hot (or control?). On a 7-9, choose 2, on a 10+ choose 3. /She eats your ass / you cum / take +1 forward / you like it (if forced) something like that?
Something like that, yes. I'd favor making get eaten out a basic move, since the corresponding male PC move she sucks your cock is a basic move. For a character move, I'd suggest 69/L7. Could be the same or different moves. Sixty-Nine: When you suck his cock, you may apply the same dice roll to get eaten out and apply all results. L-7: When you eat her out, you may apply the same dice roll to get eaten out and apply all results. Maybe -1 overall for the complexity. With a mixture of miss and hit (if +Hot and +Control are different), maybe you make him cum but you end up with a leg cramp or pass out, or vice versa. And for male PCs. Sixty-Nine: When you eat her out, you may apply the same dice roll to she sucks your cock and apply all results.
Sounds good on all counts. I'll add that stuff to the female PC rules ... eventualy. In the meantime, feel free to use those moves in your threads, and to treat get eaten out as a basic move.
You know, the more I think about an Island-Hopping Vacation scene, the more I think I will likely save that for a "summertime" story arc. I'm figuring that he could either do some one-night flings with new women--not necessarily exotic dancers themselves--or he could try and flirt with some new women, but only discover that some of the dancers he's been seeing are also there. I'm kinda leaning on the new women idea part, though, as it could lead to some interesting "fall season" ideas. In that particular case, I'm figuring that all the dancers he's been seeing realize that they have him as a common denominator, and they peacefully confront him about it. That could lead to that "fall season" theme of him having to choose one of the dancers "to complete the year-long romance". Going back to the new women ideas for the "summer season" arc, I'm thinking I could tie some of the characters that I'm planning for the Alex Leon stories--which will likely be fewer per story arc--into that particular Eric Antonelle story arc, or in some of the "comic con scenes" I have in mind for any paths related to Mia & the other "Silken Web" dancers. To SwampThing: I have a question about the "Eat Pussy" move. I want more details on how to write out the result of 7-9 & 10+ rolls when using the move, since the man won't cum when he eats her out.
dearnise, you're right, a lot of the "fuck her" options don't make sense if the man doesn't cum, and isn't forcing her. Treat the "Eat Pussy" move like this: When you eat her pussy, roll+hot. On a 10+, choose 3. On a 7-9, choose 2. /You eat her ass. / She cums. / Take +1 forward.
Given all the advice that Pool Guy Joe's ex-girlfriend has been giving him (and that her friend has underlined), "Take +1 forward" as an option for Eat Pussy sounds like a fine idea.
I'm bumping up against the limits of the options for "On 10+, choose 3" for orgasm after She Sucks Your Cock. If I didn't force her (Older Brother Tom, using OMG), and there isn't another girl around, I seem to come up a little short. The options for the "when you cum on her face" basic move are: * She swallows your cum * You're hard again already * There's enough to share (but no other girls, and I'm guessing that it's not a basic option to have her share with you?) * You make her like it (but she wasn't forced). Thoughts? For now I'll stick with the first two. The decision point is at this thread (freshly submitted, not yet approved as of this forum note): https://chyoa.com/story/5757/thread/189161
I think an extra option or two should be added, if you're hard already after you cum, and it's just one woman that swallows. Or maybe take +1 forward for the next move made? I also have another move idea, which could either be a basic move for both PC genders, or a character move. It's the use of toys, like vibrators, beads, dildos, sybians, etc. Maybe they can be used like basic moves, depending on how they're used. I think they can be useful options, especially for female PC characters; or when a man is watching multiple women use them on each other, regardless of whether or not they've been told to do it, or were forced to do it.
