Slut World

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by 2p1k3, Oct 16, 2014.

  1. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

  2. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    Gloria has embraced her new life as a lover of women, after a few bumps and a threat to her nursing job.

    Gloria has gone back to thank Mary by visiting her house with Nurse Julie to demonstrate how to use a strap-on for Mary's daughter Sarah, who has a crush on a fellow college girl.

    Any suggestions for a new Character Move for Gloria to choose after a rousing demonstration of strapping it on with Julie?

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/On-a-7-9,-choose-two-when-you-give-it-to-Julie.302795
     
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  3. ofhabit

    ofhabit Virgin

    I discovered this thread and love the idea of using this Powered by the Apocalypse mechanic to write the story. I started writing a new character ( https://chyoa.com/chapter/Sean-Zunge,-Golden-Tongued.538257 ) and tried to write out all three success levels as branches, and have pretty quickly realized that I am just trying to redirect most of it back to the "main" plotline of what I'm doing. I am much more comfortable writing this "single-threaded" so I'm going to go back and edit / restructure what little I've written so far. I hope it's not too much of an inconvenience.

    Also, the Desire variant rules seem to fit what I'm going for, so I'm adding those in too. I will echo what others have said and say myself that this is a great idea and you have built a wonderful framework for storytelling.
     
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  4. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    Reading back through the forums, I see I forgot this! Recently I'd been using GET FUCKED (+Hard) for a female PC getting eaten out. Mary Forbes would do much better with +Hot than +Control, but either could be fun.