Consentacle

Discussion in 'Story Ideas' started by Nemo of Utopia, Feb 9, 2018.

  1. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    So, this is an idea I've had before, but I think I've got a better handle on it this time:

    The First iteration was here:

    https://chyoa.com/story/*-Tentacle-Monsters-And-The-Women-Who-Love-Them-*.12438

    As you can see, it went nowhere.

    This was my second, (much more recent) thought...

    https://forum.chyoa.com/threads/a-tentacle-monster-story-with-a-twist.1459/

    And then I encountered this, and it all began to gel...

    https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/990619951/consentacle-a-card-game-of-human-alien-intimacy

    So, here's the new idea:

    This story will take place on an intergalactic space station in the distant future, where tens of millions of sapient species of every description meet. The humans are newly invited into the fold of Inter-galactic sapients and need to make a good first impression. We've done our homework and know there are several races we can probably ally with, but one, in particular, is key: the Golgana, because they are an old, powerful, and respected race in the Pan-Universal Union. However, they also are...

    How to say this?

    Perverts.

    Though they don't insist on it by any means* the fastest way to gain admission to their little Clique of Water/Carbon/Oxegen based sapients is to have your embassy staff seduce the higher-ranking-but-single staff members of the group's various embassies...

    Good news for us?

    We're pervs too...

    *(Rape is, almost literally, unthinkable to them. BDSM? It's old hat by the time they turn 180. Fuck machines/vibrators? Typical 150th birthday present: from your grandparents! Screwing other races? If you haven't managed to seduce a Chakra† by the time you're 210 you're seen as mentally defective. Rape, however, they culled from their species ruthlessly eons ago. This may explain why they're such pervs: if you never need fear your lover taking things too far: you'll be more willing to experiment...)
    †(The most irrepressibly horny race in the little clique we're trying to join: they look kind of like a cross between king crabs, rabbits, and greys: except with four pairs of A-D cup tits and the size of a typical pony...)

    What does everyone think: suggestions, critique, offers of support, questions?
     
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  2. 229

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    I have no idea what a Chakra is supposed to look like lol

    It sounds good, although I'm a little curious as to what various races look like. Also, is there a reason all the Golgana are single?
     
  3. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Oh, they're not*, but to join we're only trying to seduce the single ones...
    *(a lot of them have open relationships, but that's not the same thing: for one thing, the one that wants to have an extramarital liaison has to ask their spouse's permission first...)
     
  4. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Ok, are you being serious? I'll have to get Artican to draw it for me next month if you are...

    WELL, I'm planning to have illustrations for each of them, but...

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/Background-Information-Threads-(Top-Page:-Non-Story-).342553

    That has a thorough description of the Golglana.

    EDIT: some details are being changed though, notably mating habits.
     
  5. DoAdventures

    DoAdventures Really Really Experienced

    I think it sounds really interesting and I would be very keen to read it.

    It does sound very immersive and I'm jealous that I haven't been able to come up with anything half as big or intriguing. Looking forward to reading it.
     
  6. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Well, I am drawing on a lot of inspiration from existing content, so while I'd love to take credit for the depth an degree of originality, I... Flat out, CAN'T. ^~^;
     
  7. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    But this: I can take credit for: not the drawing itself, but all the ideas that went into it...

    [​IMG]

    (Artican did the work though, I just kept making him redo it till it was just-so...)
     
  8. DoAdventures

    DoAdventures Really Really Experienced

    :( I can't see the image
     
  9. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Sad, I don't know why there'd be a problem though...
     
  10. dingsdongs

    dingsdongs Really Really Experienced

  11. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    That's bizarre...

    Huh, shows up for me just fine...
     
  12. dingsdongs

    dingsdongs Really Really Experienced

    Ah, but of course! Now that i have taken a really good look at it, i can see it as well!
    And it is fabulous!
    A unique style, it's attention to detail unparalleled. Simply a true masterpiece!

    https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Emperor's_New_Clothes

    @Nemo: In all honesty though, if the image does show up for you, and it doesn't for us, there might be some kind of bug or permission issue with the image upload. I bet that you can probably reproduce our experience if you open the forum from a different browser or incognito modus, where you do not login.

    And you might be able to "fix" the issue by deleting the old attachment and then uploading the image again. If that doesn't work, an admin should take a look at the issue.
     
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  13. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Good suggestions, I will try them when I get home tomorrow...
     
  14. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    [​IMG]

    Did it work this time?

    EDIT: How about this?

    [​IMG]
     
  15. Fierbali111

    Fierbali111 Experienced

    Not sure it would be so arousing two imagine someone having sex with a crab/bunny grey alien that has breasts. Maybe some asari like creature thats hermaphroditic would be more appealing. I think its best to stick to a tentacle or humanoid alien creature but thats just my opinion.
     
  16. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    What's an Asari?
     
  17. Fierbali111

    Fierbali111 Experienced

    A female alien from the mass effect video game series
     
  18. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    After reading up on the Asari, I have to say that they are interesting enough, but not quite what I had in mind for this story. This is especially true after playing a lot of "SPORE" and seeing just how diverse even humanoid beings can be...