Okay, I've submitted the first one! I figured Chloe and Gavin would be a logical couple to start with, considering what had transpired between them and what both of them had witnessed back at Lisa's cabin. I've taken your suggestion about them to heart Patzo, in that their newfound physical attraction to one another is intermingling weirdly with their past friendship and that neither are sure how they want this to progress. They still want to talk to one another about it, but they're nervous -- so Chloe gets the idea of breaking the tension by dancing. Whenever that actually does that or not is for someone else to decide if they so choose Also, they may not be the first to hit the dancefloor, and I doubt that they are -- there's plenty of time from when Hannah starts the music to the end of their conversation that anyone else could start the festivities.
Ah whoops! I forgot the timeline on that one, guess I conflated it with Heather and Kurt having been friends when they were little. I don't think it requires big changes to make it work: Kurt hit on Jennifer two years ago, and she didn't take him seriously for being so young, but she's seriously considering it now that he's an adult and much more experienced with flirtation. Someone's gotta be first, why not them? Glad you found those ideas helpful! I think the orgy will be good for exploring blurred, untidy relationships, and with their inexperience, seeing Chloe and Gavin fumble through it provides a lot of possibilities. EDIT: It could be that Lisa's parents are worried about her going to a cabin with people they don't know, so when the music starts booming, they call the ranger station and ask someone to knock on the door. Then the dancing scenario gets wilder until it looks like people are about to strip on the dance floor, or we can just decide how many turns each author will have, until Jennifer "suddenly" arrives to make them keep it down. I figure Jennifer then would go inside to make sure no one underage is drinking hard liquor: she'll give them a pass on the beer because she likes Heather, as long as it's all gone before she leaves. Then someone gets the idea to play a drinking game to get rid of it and convinces Jennifer to join in.
Yarkoz had a great start with Chloe and Gavin, really captured well both of their characters. Who's next on the order, Patzo or Zingiber? About the Kurt/Jennifer possible plot, I think I might have found a way for it to work like you first suggested, Patzo; it's even something I could use on my main thread when I think about it. There's a summer camp somewhere on Silver Lake Park or nearby it, and Jennifer worked there as a counselor for a few summers, meeting Kurt there. Kurt's mother sent him there for several summers as a way to get herself some rest from his rowdy behavior (I think since he was 11 or 12), and he spent most of those summers admiring Jennifer there until he met Andrea and turned into his douchebag self. Then three years ago, with Kurt being 16 and Jennifer being 25, she stopped working on the camp to pursue her intent of becoming a ranger. They've met again a year later on the park when Jennifer rescued Heather and he hit on her for the first time and, like you've said, she didn't take him seriously, what with them being nine years apart. The rest we'll see on the party.
It's Zingiber's if he wants it. I like that. It expands on the information we have rather than retconning any of it to suit the new idea.
Yeah, that's more or less like I've envisioned the night going, things getting hotter with them dancing until Jennifer knocks on the door after the station received some complaints from nearby cabins about the loud music. The game can be truth or dare, strip truth or dare, spin the bottle or some variation, I think that a drinking game could leave them drunk and I don't know about your opinions, but having everyone sober during the orgy would make it hotter in my opinion.
You're right, I'm not a fan of the idea myself now that it's out there. Things get uncomfortably muddy about when consent is or is not given once booze enters the mix, and we don't need more than Jennifer coming in to make sure everyone is safe, someone tells her to hang around since she came all this way, game time.
Thank you, thank you! As for the Kurt/Jennifer plot, Jennifer could've even been in foresty school at the time, working at the camp over the summer break/working between semesters in general. At 25, she could've been hired by the Silver Lake Park authority. Agreed on the drinking game, for the reason everyone has stated. Drunken/under the influence orgies and consenual sex are just not in the same category, IMO.
Like I've said, I'm partial to truth or dare, because as juvenile as it is, it can bring some interesting truths to the surface that could help on the build up, aside of course from the fun dares (a great bonus).
Let me pass and have someone else jump in rather than holding up the bus. I haven't really caught up with Peter, Shawn, Kendra, Jennifer.
I've only seen your edit now, Zingiber. That was an issue I was thinking about how to approach in a way that doesn't limit what you or Yarkoz or Patzo can or can't do. I suppose we should use the character's versions featured in the threads leading to it, and they have a few differences if we compare them with their counterparts at other threads. I'll take a shot here on breaking them down by experience/eagerness like you've said. As always, everyone's welcome to give their opinion. Zack: Currently split between Victoria (his crush of two years) and Heather (someone he found a great connection with during the trip), had a few sexual experiences with both (performed oral sex on Heather behind the waterfall and on Victoria from behind while spying Ashley and Brandon having sex, and later received a blowjob from her at the cave). Had a crush on Hannah when he was kid and before getting to know Victoria, he idolizes her. Used to date Lisa about eight months before the story and got dumped by her when she learned about his drunken escapade with an unknown girl during Ashley's birthday party, they had sex for the first time during the trip when Zack went to retrieve Gavin with Chloe at her cabin. As for other girls, Zack has been shown to have some level of admiration for Jennifer. He basically would be happy with having sex with either Heather or Victoria and would be a bit overwhelmed, but pleased nonetheless, about doing it with Hannah. He probably wouldn't mind doing it with Lisa again. Ashley and Chloe are two girls he had never really thought about sexually for different reasons (Brandon and old friendship). Incest with Taylor never crossed his mind either, but that's something that may change as the game progresses or when he sees her at the orgy. Kendra is someone he doesn't really know other than the fact that she was a friend of his sister during high school. Gavin: The only virgin amongst the guys, fell in love with his old friend Chloe and had small crushes on Heather and Taylor at some point on his life. The only experience he has comes from watching porn and licking Chloe at Lisa's cabin, not to mention an unfinished handjob from Lisa herself at the same night. He probably would feel comfortable only with Chloe, but during the orgy, extreme horniness may change that. Brandon: He only had sex with Ashley on his entire life, but their relationship seems to be hanging by a thread right now because of her. As for other girls, he used to lust for Victoria before meeting Ashley and falling in love with her, he also admitted on his thoughts to have jerked off to Ashley's sister Hannah a few times. He probably gave passing looks at Chloe or Heather a few rare times as well. He thinks that Ashley is the only girl in his mind, but the orgy might cause some of his repressed urges to be released. Kurt: The most experienced amidst the boys. Admired Jennifer ever since he was a little boy on the summer camp. After he had his heart broken by a girl named Andrea, he turned into an uncaring jerk hellbent on fucking as many girls as possible without giving a damn about them; but Heather and Zack helped to redeem him later after his blunder with Chloe. He only had sex with girls of his own age group, which might enhance his curiosity towards Jennifer, an older woman. As for other girls, he lusts towards his cousin Heather, but he doesn't understand it (it might be some level of curiosity on breaking the taboo of fucking a family member). The unfinished photoshoot with Chloe in the woods might have some consequences here. All in all, he probably wouldn't mind having a go at any of the girls. Peter: Never fully recovered from the break up with Hannah and still carries a torch for her, a fact that eventually ruined all of his subsequent relationships. He and Taylor are old friends (a bit like Zack and Chloe, but not so much), however the possibility of hooking up never crossed their minds before (that might change during the party). Probably wouldn't mind doing the other girls as long as it doesn't messes the chances he still thinks he has with Hannah. Dustin: His sole focus on the trip is Victoria, he wants to have her back as his girlfriend, even if it means a long-distance relationship. Tried dating other girls and had sex with a couple of them, but it didn't work because his mind is focused on Vicky. Shawn: Used to date Kendra back in high school, but now he uses her devotion to him to treat her as a sex slave. In his opinion, the only use girls have is to please his cock in any way he wants. Developed a fixation on fucking Victoria ever since she was dating his brother, he wanted to ruin her for him, to make him watch as he deflowered her. He also wants to screw Taylor because he thinks she looks down at him, a crime in his eyes since he sees all girls as cock-hungry sluts. Heather: The most experienced amidst the younger girls. Had sex with three different boys, not counting her first time, when she drank too much and felt like a slut. Ever since they came into the cabin, she has been developing feelings for Zack, a change from the guys she usually dates, who only seem to want sex from her. Has been rediscovering a friendship with her cousin Kurt during the past half day. Kissed two different girls just for fun and wouldn't be opposed to doing it again or go further with one in the right circumstances. Victoria: A virgin, has developed feelings for Zack after discovering their shared interest of mysteries and remembers fondly about Dustin, becoming really confused about her feelings when she saw him again just before the party. Never had any lesbian experience, and she'd probably be the hardest one to see interacting with a girl, since she's the straightest amongst the girls and isn't curious to do it (you never know what may happen in a truth or dare game or during an orgy, though). Ashley: She only was with one guy in her life, Brandon. However, their relationship is suffering a deteriorating process, due to Ashley's increasing curiosity about being with a different boy (no matter each one, although she'd probably have a bigger interest on gentler guys, like Zack, Gavin or Peter). Never thought about girls sexually before, but she wouldn't be opposed to a little experimenting. Chloe: A virgin, has been experiencing a few interesting moments during the trip, like the aborted photoshoot with Kurt and the time Gavin licked her to an orgasm after she spied on Zack fucking Lisa, a fact that made her take a romantic interest on Gavin. Her image issues could be a problem during an orgy, but she has been lowering her guard lately with people that make her feel at ease with herself and her body. Never had a lesbian experience, but she's comfortable with naked girls (the soccer team's locker room helping with that) and a little experimenting might not find too much resistance from her. Taylor: Probably the most normal girl of them all, dated a few times during high school and college, had sex, doesn't have any hidden urge (nothing that she knows about, at least). Incest with Zack never crossed her mind, but that can change during an extreme situation. Never even kissed a girl, but she would be open to new experiences. Hannah: The most experienced of the girls. Became bi after breaking up with Peter, dating and having sex with both guys and girls, nothing in excess though. Open to a little of everything, curious to experience new feelings. Kendra: Loves and hates Shawn, the center of her universe. Hates the way he treats her, but she can't get away because she loves him. An extreme situation might be a way for her to fall deeper into her current predicament or to break free of the hold Shawn has on her. Lisa: Still likes Zack, even after eight months of their break up. She promised to herself to get over him after they had sex at her cabin the night before. She would probably be a bit scared of trying new things, but it might be a way for her to fulfill her promise and forget Zack. Jennifer: A 28-year old woman who doesn't have much time to herself, due to her hard work as a ranger, a fact that limits her dating opportunities. Because of that, she sees the party as a way to unwind for a while, although she would be very reluctant and wary of getting herself involved in a sexual way with kids that much younger than her (the game would play a big part into seducing her into participating in whatever madness happening later).
Truth or dare is fine with me. No worries. I can skip my turn forward this time 'round if that works for everyone.
Well, Yarkoz and I already had our turns, if Zingiber doesn't mind, I guess it's your turn then, Patzo.
The I Never game is an alternative, but to tell the truth, I don't see it having the trigger effect that truth or dare has, a bold dare gone wrong and we've got ourselves an orgy. As for the drinks, there's already some going around the party to the ones who like it, I feel that forcing them to drink in a game would only make them drunk and mess with their consent, as we discussed about a few posts back. A scene with everyone more or less sober would be hotter, I think.
The trick to doing a good orgy story is to not make it like every other orgy story on the net where everyone, even the most inhibited, is going sex crazy. There should be several main participants going all out, a few people who will only participate with one or two others, a few bystanders who just watch, a director who eggs everyone on, a voyeur couple who watch in secret, and yes, someone who chickens out and leaves. The fun in writing these scenes is everyone's line-up being different.
Agreed, I don't expect everyone of them taking the same role, not at first, but at the end, I think everyone will be on board. Chloe, Gavin and Victoria are the ones I imagine having the most hang ups about joining in; as for Chloe and Gavin, a solution was already suggested, they do with each other and then extreme horniness makes them ease in, I imagine Chloe would be up to some action with Zack as well. Victoria is someone I think it'll be interesting to come up with a reason to join in, seeing as she's only interested on Zack and on Dustin to a smaller degree.
Nothing else someone could always slip away and someone else follow for the sake of drama, that the fun thing about writing on choya though anything and everything can happen at the same time.
Agreed on all counts. I think we're doing a good job ratcheting up the tension by focusing on character relationships, so let's keep our eyes on the ball. Zingiber discussed the role of "sympathetic observers" a few pages back as well, letting the timid/novice members of the group do their own thing while they watch everyone else go crotch-diving. We might want to consider any involvement a good time for certain characters, rather than assume they'll be rolling on top of bodies. Victoria will probably only want to try things with Zack or Dustin, so once she's done with one or both of them I can see her tapping out from the whole thing and heading back to the Ravers cabin. Lisa possibly as well, since she doesn't know half the guys at this party and may be nervous about jumping someone she's just met. If she ends up with Zack, though, anything might be possible. Chloe and Gavin could go either way depending on whether or not they make a good pair. If the author decides they're good together, then they care too much about each other and are having too much fun on their own to hook up with anyone else. If they aren't a good pair, they have desires the other can't satisfy and find new partners. Brandon could take it personally if he sees Ashley with another guy since they're on the rocks but not broken up, making him a wild card. I can see him up and leaving, fuming on the sidelines, going at it hard with someone close to Ashley (or her partner) for revenge, or getting in the middle and pointing his cock in all directions.
I agree that all actions at least until halfway through the orgy itself should be based on the pre-established relationships or the already simmering ones. Then we can decide if we want to mix things up a bit, seeing as there are characters who would want to, or at the very least wouldn't mind to, have sex with more than one character. As I said, Victoria is the hardest one, in my opinion, to get involved in the orgy. As Patzo pointed out, she would want to interact with only Zack or Dustin and it would be hard to persuade her into going at it with another character. Unless someone decides to go down the path of Shawn seducing her or making her getting curious about experimenting with a girl. Lisa is another tricky character, she would only want to be with Zack and is a minor character at the best, I'm starting to wonder if we even should bother to include her at this point. Chloe, as I've said, I think that despite her budding relationship with Gavin, she would be up to a little action with Zack, if nothing else to express their very close friendship in a deeper way. As for Brandon, Patzo described really well how I think he'll act during the party and the orgy itself, I have nothing to add here. One character that I'm starting to wonder how we can handle without it getting ugly is Shawn. As I've mentioned on his bio, he has a rather crude way of seeing women, and that can very well mess up everyone's plans or turn the scene even more interesting. Any thoughts, guys?
