At the Cabin

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by johnhoftb, Sep 20, 2014.

  1. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    That's what I'm thinking as well, for example, maybe it'd be logical for Zack to end up with Heather or Vicky, but we might decide on a different match as the night goes on and their chemistry gets tested around. It'll be a fun ride for sure.
     
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  2. Yarkoz

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    It does all depend. I've always been a Heather/Zack fan, but the night is young, and not all of our players have arrived yet. I wonder how many nearby cabins have complained to the ranger station, and how loud Jennifer's grumbles are after realizing the noise is coming from the vicinity of the Ravers' cabin. :)
     
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  3. Patzo

    Patzo Really Experienced

    Not gonna lie, I'm behind Heather/Zack too, but at the same time, Zack is gonna get with both before the night is over. Don't lie and say you're not looking forward to that threesome.
     
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  4. Duskford

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    Jennifer will probably get at least a bit annoyed, that's for sure! And Patzo has a point regarding that threesome, but I've got to say that after all the build-up we're doing, I'm looking forward to a lot of stuff. ;)
     
  5. Cretan_Bull14

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    Regarding that threesome: This bull has taken that bull by the horns as we speak ;)
     
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  6. Yarkoz

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    Oh, you horny bull you
     
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  7. Duskford

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    Awesome, Cretan_Bull14! I assume this is the branch you were talking about at an earlier post?
     
  8. Cretan_Bull14

    Cretan_Bull14 Really Experienced

    It is. It will be awhile before things develop to that point though. I'm just mapping it out now. All I can say is: Expect the unexpected.
     
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  9. Duskford

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    Well, things seem to be running smoothly! My Zack/Hannah thread for the orgy storyline will take another day to get ready, it's turning out to be a little longer than I expected.

    On another note, Cretan_Bull14 is doing an awesome job with his own orgy thread, congratulations!
     
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  10. Cretan_Bull14

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    Thanks Duskford. Can't wait to read your thread. As for mine, I will be introducing a new character an upcoming thread. I think everyone will like her.
     
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  11. Duskford

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    A new character, huh? Well, based on the tension built up on the previous threads, a new character may be a very welcome addition to spice things up even more, I'm sure she'll be liked.
     
  12. henrytemp

    henrytemp Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    On my Kendra thread- I'll be honest, at this point I have no idea what she is going to do for revenge. I have some ideas and have been brainstorming, but I feel it has to be bigger than just keeping him from Victoria. After all, he has mentally abused her and he really deserves a big comeuppance. I went ahead and wrote the last scene because it had been bouncing around my head and needed to come out. Also, I decided it'd be more fun to have Kendra fuck with Zack's head rather than straight up blackmail him into sex.

    I'm planning this to be a pretty dark thread, with characters fighting, lying, feeling betrayed and seeking their own kinds of revenge. I'm thinking about mirroring some of the events in Duskford's main thread such as the Brandon-Vicky kiss, and what would happen if Ashley saw or found out about that. Even though she broke up with him, that's a pretty big betrayal, especially on Vicky's part. Also thinking about how a Zack-Heather trip to town would go if Zack is 1. distracted by Kendra and 2. wondering if Heather is the one who set him up. I know I'm going to do the prior, not sure on the latter.

    No one will have a darker path in this thread than Taylor. She is going to hell, as mentioned in another thread, but is going to come back. The slap was a small victory, but she will have some more bad moments. However my plan is to have her come out on top in the end.
     
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  13. Duskford

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    Sounds like it'll be a very intriguing storyline, that's for sure. Ashley witnessing the kiss would already be an awesome source of friction, but this darker trip with Zack and Heather sounds promising as well, especially if he thinks she's the one behind Kendra. I'm also looking forward to see what you have planned for Taylor.
     
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  14. Yarkoz

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    I'm thinking she'll show up in my thread in "Tales from Silver Lake." Jennifer needs a good friend ;)
     
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  15. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    She was quite the lively one, that's for sure, and she'd probably be a good addition to your story on the rangers, Yarkoz.
     
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  16. Duskford

    Duskford CHYOA Guru

    So, Yarkoz's story about the rangers gave me an idea for a follow up to At the Cabin. I know this is fiction, but I don't want to step into the realm of absurdity here, so how much plausible would it be for Chief Jensen or Jennifer to ask Zack and a second character to help around the park for a week or during the summer as a summer job?
     
  17. Yarkoz

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    In the States, you can volunteer at national parks, so I don't think something like that would be out of the ordinary. The Forest Service website is down for maintenance right now, so I can't see any details, but apparently they actively encourage that for school credit and public service for honors society membership -- things that look good on a college application. I can totally see Zack, Gavin, Victoria or Heather taking advantage of that in the At the Cabin universe of whatever generic country they live in. (I've tried to keep that as vague as possible -- country-centric attitudes still filter in from time to time.)

    EDIT: Ah, now it works -- http://www.fs.usda.gov/main/volunteer/about -- and yes, you can be a volunteer ranger for several days -- http://www.volunteer.gov/results.cfm?ID=14787 -- so definitely duskford, it can totally work
     
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  18. Duskford

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    Thanks for the answer, Yarkoz! Good to know that it's possible, I'm thinking about having a couple characters helping the rangers, since after the bear case is solved, they'll be a bit shorthanded.

    As for the country, even if I created a fictional town and park, I imagine the story happening on the USA as well.
     
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  19. Cretan_Bull14

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    The US National Park Service employs seasonal as well as full-time employees and volunteers. When I created Katelyn, I figured her as a new seasonal ranger as a way to explain why Heather and Kurt don't know her.
     
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  20. Yarkoz

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    Just a head's up everybody, my weekend is completely booked. I won't log on until after Monday, so if Patzo and duskford submit their latest entries to the orgy threads, then I look forward to reading and submitting to them after Tuesday! Have a lovely weekend everyone!
     
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