Slut World

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by 2p1k3, Oct 16, 2014.

  1. SwampThing

    SwampThing Experienced

    Zingiber, when in doubt, add "take +1 forward" to your list of options.

    dearnise, I'd like to see your new toys move.
     
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  2. dearnise

    dearnise Experienced

    Sex Toys: If the male PC uses a sex toy on a woman, roll +Control. On a 10+, choose 3 options. On a 7-9, choose 1 or 2 options.
    Dildo or Beads - You work the dildo in her ass / She cums / She loves it / You make her like it (if forced) / Take +1 forward
    Vibrator, Feather, or a Suction Device for her pussy - She cums / She loves it / You make her like it (if forced) / Take +1 forward

    If a female PC uses a sex toy, roll +Control. On a 10+, choose 3 options. On a 7-9, choose 1 or 2 options.
    Dildo, Beads, or Strap-On on another woman - Same as above for the male PC
    Dildo or Strap-On on a man - He cums / He's about to cum, and you can roll to swallow it / He loves it / You make him like it (if forced or dominated) / Take +1 forward
    Vibrator, Sybian, Feather, or a Suction Device on another woman's pussy - Same as above for the male PC

    This could either be a basic move, or a character move; although if it is a basic move, then it could be used in conjunction with an available character move, like "Eat Pussy".

    Example: A male PC makes a move to use a vibrator to slide the tip inside a woman's pussy, pressing it against her g-spot, while he eats her out.
    On a 10+, she loves it, and cums. Take +1 forward.

    This is just an early concept of such moves.
     
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  3. dearnise

    dearnise Experienced

    And Swampthing, I got your latest thread feedback. I wait for any threads with a successful sexual move to be approved before I edit it to update the PC's xp, which I have been doing lately.
     
  4. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    I still find the options for 'You fuck her, pick three' to be limited. If she is willingly fucking, pick three requires ass-fucking. I think I'll add the +1 Forward.
     
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  5. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    Multiple Orgasms lets you make more use of "Pick Three". I can't recall if there are others.
     
  6. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    That one would work, but I need one for the other characters. +1 forward is a good option. Keeps the story moving.
     
  7. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    And "She gains +1 Desire" if you're playing Desire rules, but yes, "Take +1 Forward" feels like it could be the best choice.

    I suppose for some scenarios, the "pick three" could be different for different partners, like "You make her like it" being available based on circumstances.

    "She doesn't faint as she cums"
    "She doesn't scream loudly enough to wake the neighbors as she cums"
     
  8. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    Realizing I forgot this response! I set up Mary Forbes being eaten out by the hot babes and the eager shoe store clerk using the Mistress move rather than the Get Eaten Out move. She'll have much better odds if she uses Hot than Cool, though with Mistress, her cunnilinguists might come just from the excitement of eating her out.

    I'll hang onto Cool As Fuck since it'll help Mary start later scenes, and write an alternative starting with choosing L7 as her new character move.
     
  9. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    I was about to explore the notion of Phone Sex as a character move, but it looks like Touch Yourself covers phone sex.

    Cunt-Licking, Lesbian,
    and Truth could work well on top of Touch Yourself.

    For a Female PC, Masturbate could work OK on top of Touch Yourself for phone sex for a high Control PC, and perhaps Whip It Out for a male PC with high Control to get his phone partner going herself.
     
    Last edited: Jul 2, 2015
  10. SwampThing

    SwampThing Experienced

    I like it. One other way to make a Phone Sex move work would be that when you use the tell her basic move, or any of Touch Yourself, Truth, Whip It Out, Masturbate etc. over the phone, add +1 to your roll.

    Or, when you gain xp over the phone, gain +1 extra xp.

    The more I think about it, the more I like including Desire, as it gives extra options when designing moves.

    "She doesn't faint as she cums" is brilliant.
     
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  11. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    Appreciate the encouragement! Now I have to remember what thread that was...

    ...oh, that was right up there in my forum response. :)
     
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  12. dearnise

    dearnise Experienced

    Some of the moves that have been discussed here, like the 69 position, might be something I might use in my own thread somewhere down the road. My question, is, if she cums, and swallows your cum, does that count as 2 moves for 2xp? Or 1 move for 2xp? I figure that it would be 2 moves in a single moment of time.

    I think I'm going to modify my Eric A. "Spring Break Season" story ideas, since I want to try to simplify it as much as possible. I may start working on it after I either play out the "Chinese New Year" mini-arc that I'll do after the Nadia mini-arc, or after the "Silken Web Club Anniversary Event" arc. I felt that trying to fit in so many characters into a single story option is too complex at this time, so I'll probably just center the story choices on 1 or 2 of the female characters in hand, after I do a St. Patty's Day or Renaissance Faire mini-arc with the Kiana character.

    Choices:
    • Easter Week at a major comic con: Mia -- could also include either Abbie, Chrissy, or Michelle
    • A 7-day, 6-night cruise somewhere: Jessica -- could also include either Crystal, Nadia, or Rebecca
    • Motorcycle ride in Northern California: Jaina
    • Florida getaway: Candice
    After that, for the "Summer Season" story, I figure that he takes a couple of vacation weeks of his own. I think the first one could be to visit family in Vegas. Perhaps he visits one of the high-end strip clubs in between, or encounters an old friend, who is a showgirl or some kind of model. The second one could be a trip to the tropics with an all-male crew. What I'm thinking, is that he meets up with some new women on some one-night flings. Maybe those nights gets him thinking about the dancers, who are doing their own thing at the time. Then when he returns home, he is summoned to someone's home, where all of the dancers want to know where they stand with him, and go from there.

    Comments, anyone?
     
  13. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    I wrote up 69 as a combination move where you'd roll the dice once, score each move based on the appropriate attribute and modifiers, and then describe the results of each move (She sucks your cock with Control + Eat Pussy with Hot) in combination. If you had "+1 forward", it would apply to both moves.

    I'd suggested that if it seemed too easy, we could apply a -1 modifier to use 69.

    However, her swallowing your cum would be a follow-up move after the 69 combination, "When you cum on her face..."
     
  14. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

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    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

  16. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    Hurrah for continuity. I had to go back about 8-10 threads to confirm that they were in the bedroom. That's one problem with the way I write, which bounces from storyline to storyline over time.
     
  17. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    When you mark 5 XP, I'd like to add the option of increasing a Stat by +1 (+3 max). This makes it more similar to other AW hacks.
     
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  18. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    Four of the Character Moves correspond to attribute boosts: Fucking Huge (+1 hard), Cool As Fuck (+1 cool), Iron Will (+1 control), Charming (+1 hot), though I presume as named moves you would only take them once each, and, as named, Fucking Huge seems like a funny one to pick up by experience.

    Are you thinking about leveling up one of the templates that goes +3, -1, -1, -1? Being able to get a couple of boosts might be especially nice in that case.
     
  19. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    I had forgotten those, but they can only be taken once. Yes, you could bump up those low stats, but not Hard, with this change.
     
  20. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    Another way to handle this is to allow the four +1 character moves to be taken more than once, up to the total of +3 limit. On reflection, this is how I would do it.