So.....I've done it again and lost all sparks on my newest story for the moment, wondering if I could have some opinions on the below? Should I go with this one or just knock it on the head? Jessica’s Choices – Hunt the cunt The following material is for adults only. It depicts acts of forced sex, lesbian, incest, bondage, torture and group sex. If you are forbidden to read or obtain this type of material because of either content or your age please discontinue now. It is a work of adult sexual fantasy. Now with that out of the way, hello and welcome to Jessica’s choices – Hunt the cunt, this is another story about Jessica Stanhead and an alternative to her unfortunate and unjust life. This story takes place after the successful procurement of Jessica from the auction by Dollar Bill and will follow the six girls successfully bided for. Dollar bill runs a huge entertainment ring, his most famous and well regarded business venture is his *Hunt The Cunt* adventure park, set for the first ever televised hunt next month. The park is set in the grounds of his huge house covering a vast expanse inhabited with animals and contains massive flurries of trees, a huge lake some rocky hills and a seemingly never ending salt flat. Bill has been successfully out bidding everyone tonight and currently has five other girls all bound in his waiting van. He was about to call it a night before Jessica was brought out and thinks she will be an excellent addition to the group he has already and believes with the addition of Jessica’s perfect little body the first ever televised Hunt the Cunt; the ratings will soar. This will be my first story involving you! You sit down at your TV and the action happens right before your eyes. Chapter 1 Lights, TV, Camera, action! “What the fu?” you say as you flick through the channels quickly catching a banner headline on your screen in capital letters. DOLLAR BILL’S HUNT THE CUNT “Hello everyone” Grunted the unmistakeable voice of Dollar Bill as the banner headline faded to a black screen before showing Dollar sat at a huge somewhat elongated table facing the camera clasping his hands together. “Welcome to Hunt The Cunt, in the surrounding grounds I have six, sex starved, beauty queens waiting to be chassed and fucked in any conceivable way by their hunters, in the hives the girls are provided with a backpack that consists of bottled water and a small first aid kit” As Dollar finished his introduction six smaller screens appeared around him showing a darkened room on the live feed. The main feed then switched to showing a vast expensed area with narrator explaining various aspects of the harsh land that the girls would need to cover. As the camera hovered over on the hives the narrator began speaking, “Here is one of the contestants homes” the camera focusing on a tiny little hive “Good morning fucktards!” bellowed throughout the six small hives.
I like the idea but i would like to see the girls armed with a simple weapon on a hunt of their own-get the guy that raped them to begin with or in Jessica's case everybody since you introduced her! Hell the girls can be paid if they kill their rapists that way they don't go defense mode immediately
It looks good, I would say go with it. adding the aspect of the reader being the viewer really adds to the immersion, and is just a cool idea.
I've got something in the works for a spit on your grave type thing for Jessica (plan to play it out like a movie with flash backs) and totally dependant on the original story and where the reader went with the joining ones, it'll be the last in the series of Jessica's choices stories, so far there are another 4 or possibly 5 stories before that one though :-/
So i let my girlfriend read all the Jessica's saga (Love it!) She wondered if you ever considered doing the same story but with Jessica as the baddie to some other unfortunate person?
There is a possibility of Jessica being bad in Origins story and possible on some of the families I'm going towrite her living with in that story and in the Forced story. Thank you and your girlfriend very much, sorry for some of the dead ends in my main story, it's a bit of beast
Perhaps a "Hunger Games" style element where viewers could pay to help the hunters or have them perform specific acts upon the ladies? It would be interesting if the "game" were _really_ rigged against them, and the growing savagery of the audience was encouraging the cruelty of the hunters. There could even be a feedback element- for example, if a viewer could pay $50 to give a hunter a GPS "ping" of a woman's location, and she becomes aware that a whole group of viewers are paying to have her "pinged" every few minutes, making her capture all but inevitable- she could desperately offer to strip or perform naughty acts for the watching camera if only they'll stop giving her position away.
What a brilliant idea! I'm very much in the begining of this and this could be the way to immerse the reader as the viewer, I wonder if there is a voting option I could put on the branches?
Decided that this was too good to pass up and wait for, on the prison story it will go into that following https://chyoa.com/chapter/Corrupted-within.272208 And how she changes and the effect that she was placed in prison regardless of the fact that the law knew she had done nothing wrong. So it'll only effect the Origins wronguns and Forced (George, Percy and Elsa and some of the inmates) but there is enough people that have done her harm to have a little fun with it
I can hardly wait to start reading! If i may be so bold as to ask for a punishment where she makes one of the guys cum on her face,just as the first rope comes out she machettes his cock off!
Remind me to never kick my ball in your garden , seems a bit harsh but if anyone deserves it, it'll be George?
Actually that my girlfriend Tammy's idea. She has another one but I can't type and cover my crotch with crossed legs at the same time,i don't think any guy could type what she would want done to the guys. Something about honey,fire ants and a hypodermic needle!
One easy tangent is her getting "mixed up" and placed in the men's prison. It would be interesting to create a dom storyline with her there making the other prisoners sissies or something.
