Comments on Profile Post by Gambio

Is it to late to edit? :)

Once I returned to chapters made years ago, and my impressions were...
From one point of view: Wow, did I write this barely readable thing?
From the other point of view: Wow, I improved greatly!

let me put it this way. I'm currently on chapter 78 and I stopped mentioning her hat at around chapter 30 lol

Her hat was kinda a big deal at first as well

Haven't decided yet If I just roll with it and hope nobody notices

I've had worse. I once displaced an entire cock. And I didn't notice until I'd written an entire branch. I had to go back, write a quick explanation for the disappearing dick, and then started a side-branch to investigate why the penis mysteriously vanished.

Next time I do a big story, I'm including a little place on my spreadsheet to describe what the main character is wearing (or not wearing) in every chapter.

lol that's amazing. Stuff like this definitely lends itself for some creative storytelling, so there's that

For anyone morbidly curious, this is the side-branch: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Wait%2C-What-Did-Happen-To-Lois-Lane%27s-Cock.1066411

Congratulations, your character now has a magic hat that appears only in socially appropriate contexts! Buy the rest of the set for just 70 gold pieces!
*2 hours pass*
...Oh dear, it's a little buggy.

that's actually a lot more contextually appropriate then you might realized, even down to the pricing lol