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  1. Torg

    I just published an epic CHYOA erotica for Kindle

    Write up a how-to article. The tools you use, mapping, etc. It'd be a great resource.
  2. Torg

    Slut World

    I just wrote a thread where the MC tried to avoid trouble and failed, when a jealous boyfriend showed up. I took the "Pass out" miss move to mean that the MC passed out from getting hit or stunned, instead of the girl passing out.
  3. Torg

    I just published an epic CHYOA erotica for Kindle

    This is huge! Congrats! I'd love to take some of my stories in this direction. Thanks for the inspiration. Does the kindle have a story structure that accommodates CYOA?
  4. Torg

    Threads approval reports

    You can see unapproved threads, if you are in the parent thread. So, it's possible to have views before you are approved. These threads are list in the bottom of the parent thread as "Not approved yet". They don't show up in the story map.
  5. Torg

    Sneak Peek at Chyoa 2

    Did you make a recent update that let's threads waiting for approval get put into the "Waiting for Approval" queues of the non-owner privilege users? I'm getting stuff in my queue for Slut World, which I'm not editing, but I do have what I would have called "Trusted" status in the old CHYOO.
  6. Torg

    Caught By Our Babysitter

    Wow, apparently, this story struck a nerve, because my new threads already have 229 and 111 views in 2-3 days, and the story as a whole has 5000 more views than last week.
  7. Torg

    Caught By Our Babysitter

    I've started editing threads to make them all first person, past tense. "I watched her intently. She pinched her nipples." not "You watch her intently. She pinches her nipples." I'm lucky that there aren't very many threads ... which I'm also starting to remedy. I've added threads for the first...
  8. Torg

    Slut World

    Just to clarify. If a PC with OMG! exposes his cock to two women, can he treat them as if he made them both beg, ala Group Sex?
  9. Torg

    Slut World

    The same problem mentioned previously for "cum on her face" and "fuck her" occurs with "she sucks your cock". If you get a 10+, you have to not cum. I plan to add "+1 forward". Does someone have a better idea? Edit: It's worse than I thought. There's already a +1 forward option.
  10. Torg

    Slut World

    So we discussed Apocalypse World and Monsterhearts. My gaming group finished a game of AP last spring, and now we're playing Monsterhearts. My character in AP was an androgynous 18 year old Brainer, whom I didn't assign a gender to until they were in a sex scene where someone would find out. The...
  11. Torg

    Training Meghan

    I hope my additions have been fun and sexy. I love the many directions you've gone in a short amount of time. And the variety of characters. I don't know if I'll ever get out of the sorority soiree.
  12. Torg

    Slut World

    Thanks, Zingiber, for catching the name thing in my latest thread. I had originally named the two sisters Carol and Janet, but when you posted the parallel thread, I adopted the names from it. I use a Wiki for writing, and I never changed the names in the title or in the question. Thanks again...
  13. Torg

    How did you all find this place?

    I found Literotica when I was looking for a place to publish my erotica short stories. That lead me to CHYOO through one of the links. When CHYOA was created, I saw an announcement in the Literotica/CHYOO forums. I was ecstatic, since there had been many years of neglect from absentee owners on...
  14. Torg

    Slut World

    Another way to handle this is to allow the four +1 character moves to be taken more than once, up to the total of +3 limit. On reflection, this is how I would do it.
  15. Torg

    Slut World

    I had forgotten those, but they can only be taken once. Yes, you could bump up those low stats, but not Hard, with this change.
  16. Torg

    Slut World

    When you mark 5 XP, I'd like to add the option of increasing a Stat by +1 (+3 max). This makes it more similar to other AW hacks.
  17. Torg

    Post suggestions here!

    It would be nice if a quickie formatting legend was at the bottom of the Edit Thread page.
  18. Torg

    Slut World

    Hurrah for continuity. I had to go back about 8-10 threads to confirm that they were in the bedroom. That's one problem with the way I write, which bounces from storyline to storyline over time.
  19. Torg

    Slut World

    Thanks, Zingiber, on your continuity catch in On a 10+, Madison willingly lets you fuck her, take +1 forward. I just changed it to Madison's desk, instead of the sink.
  20. Torg

    Post bug reports here!

    It appears all the view counts have been reset to zero.
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