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This is true and I totally relate, feedback is very underrated and I feel that people don’t realize how important or precious it can be to get of intel from what people like or dislike or hope to see n your story. Heck, sometimes feedback alone can help you avoid writers block altogether. The...

This XD this is so incredibly true and the one thing I wish I could get as well. This post is still very relatable for me today even if it’s nearly a month later, as my current story has slowed down a lot and it shows. I actually began writing a second story, one I hope to gain more fans and...

Maybe adding a link to your story would make it easier to check and provide feedback haha :)

I started this story with a lot in mind for it, it’s a slow origin but hopefully I see it more adventure focused with a band of characters to follow. It’s both simple yet difficult to describe hehe, but hopefully my writing and ideas come off as rather entertaining and enjoyable/erotic. I don’t...

I don’t mind the rant at all mate, in fact I welcome it. I love making discussions and getting to know people better haha, just haven’t made the right topic for it yet. But your words do hold weight in them and I appreciate your honesty. Sometimes (like today) I just find me doubting myself and...

I see. So far i’m attempting to end my chapters on a line similar to the title as to make the whole thing fit. Any comments towards that? As for the chapters end with a follow-up question, I’ll keep your advice in mind. Might be a bit of trial and error before I find something that fits.

You know I’m glad you mentioned the overusage of “I” as I’ve caught that and attempted to use it less frequently in my current chapters, like a bad habit that I’m slowly withdrawing from haha. I’ll be honest, I left the side branches because I am horrible with multitasking. I set up a female...

Those words are typos if anything XD glad you caught those. I try my best to keep to good grammar but blah some mistakes just sneak through. Also thanks for the ‘End of Page’ criticism, I agree it’s not really setting up anything for the next chapter. I left it in to try and give a feel of to...

Just began writing a new story that fits in the fantasy genre! Feel free to give it a quick look if you have time and let me know what you think. Any questions, comments, ideas and feedback are welcome of course :) https://chyoa.com/story/A-Hunter’s-Call.21210

I’m posting a thread here to see if anyone can leave any comments or ideas regarding my story along with questions they have as well. Just want people to be open to ask anything at all if they’re interested really. In the story you follow one of two new students entering a private school and...

I got a story in my head and I really wanna share it XD

So I’ll make this quick, what are some fantasy elements you guys love or would enjoy but haven’t found it yet on chyoa? Or maybe you’d rather see it done differently perhaps? Any kinks or story ideas?

I’m waiting to see if someone promotes mine lmao XD but I probs wouldn’t include it. Some of the female POV stories I would recommend have already been said, though if you’re into fantasy I’d say Journey of the Lost Maiden is entertaining.

Actually for a while I had the idea to post a story about people making naughty confessions but it’s been on hold for a while now. Don’t think I can pull it off or get others to add on to it, so it’s been on the shelf for now.

You know I remember seeing that one, the sex with consequences one but I don’t recall much about it. That’s a shame, sounds like it had promises but I totally understand. Sometimes you strike gold, other times you just strike.

It’s definitely not universal and wouldn’t fit for everyone, in fact I’ve read stories where the author made everything up on the fly and those stories were really damn entertaining. We all have our different methods and good on that, whatever makes you happier with your work :) For me, I felt...

I think we’ve all been there where we can’t find a direction to go in and we start losing that drive of continuing our story. So I got a small story to tell you, I find it kinda funny. I recall wondering if I should drop my story at the start of March because I wasn’t sure if anyone really...

So I require a huuuuge favor, I want to use an image illustrating a set of fantasy characters but it’s rather specific and so it might end up being a custom made drawing. Can anyone help me that’s good with art? I’m not asking for wide details lol, any help will do.

Any of y’all ever had a eureka moment where a great story just forms into your head and you smile shouting “We got it!” Cuz I just had that XD

Question, I’m attempting to write a story which is really a series of short stories about people confessing their secrets, some chapters are erotic while others aren’t. So I ask you guys, what category would this story fit in under?