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    THIS STORY NO LONGER EXISTS PLEASE DELETE THREAD!

    THIS STORY NO LONGER EXISTS PLEASE DELETE THREAD!
    • S.O.Lilith
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    • demonic desecration feedback s.o.lilith
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    Read Part One of my Story! (Contributions welcome)

    Hey everybody, For some reason my new story is displayed (at least for me) as if it only has one chapter. However, it's quite larger, with Part 1 being almost 10k words. I was kinda hoping to get some feedback for part two, so anything would be really helpful. Here's the story's logline: As a...
  3. Kazza

    Hogwarts School of Witchdom and Fuckery

    Hey just looking to get any feedback and/or advice on my recent story HSOWAF as have not received too many comments to help me make sure I'm sailing in the right direction. I'm just about to start introducing conditional chapters which I have never played around with before if anyone has any...
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    Would love to hear your feedback in my story

    Hey guys, I'd love if you could read my new erotica story- "Fucking Lena" https://chyoa.com/story/Fucking-Lena.20239?game=reset Logline- You've always been a slacker, but somehow managed to keep Lena by your side. A strange series of events will open your possibilities for MMF and FFM...
  5. Ben Rosewood

    All's fair in love and war

    I recently adopted this story and I'm interested in feedback https://chyoa.com/story/All%27s-fair-in-love-and-war.4919
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    |My First story|

    Hi there. I have just started my first story a while ago and looking for feedback. I am currently debating whether I should add a page with a description of the MC. The way I have done it so far is slowly introducing information about the MC slowly through various scenes. Not sure if this is a...
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