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I like that the trending list now takes into account how new stories are, and rankes them repectively, but it feels a bit random sometimes with its point distribution. For example the top 2 stories right now are 1 "momentum" point apart, and released at the same day. with vastly different...

Hi everyone! The name’s Usherbot, and I have this semi-long running story that I have been continuing in the stead of a friend of mine who sorta left the erotica world behind years ago. the thing is that I don’t think I’m too great of a writer at all these days and would appreciate some...

It appears there are several locations where, if you hit enter, it publishes the chapter instantly instead of moving down. I keep having to delete my drafts and recopy them to remove the accidental publishing when I just meant to edit the draft. Especially bad if this happens in the middle of an...

Morning, Afternoon, and Evening All. I wanted to reach out now that I've got some headway behind the "main" storyline of what will be Braving the Vampire's Castle, and so I wanted to ask for opinions. I feel like the story is being decently well received, despite not having any branching paths...

Hi, around 3 weeks ago I have started writing the story for Futa Resort . The story is currently at 157 chapters and a game mode type interaction. I'm starting this thread to gain feedback on what people like and how to improve my writing and ideas from people on what they'd expect from such...

I’ve just published my first story on this site and I am in desperate need of feedback. https://chyoa.com/story/An-Innocent-Wife%E2%80%99s-Urges.54069 If anyone could read it and tell me if what I’m doing is coherent and interesting or should I keep the stories in my head where they can’t bore...

its kinda getting tiresome saw an awesome branch and it quickly ended with just 3 or 4 chapter deep without proper story progression, so i was wondering if its possible to add sorting options from most chapter to least within the choice panel, or better yet, shows how many chapter each choice...

Hi everyone! New writer to CHYOA here. It'd be really great if you could give my story (https://chyoa.com/story/Don't-be-silly,-ghosts-aren't-real.47915) a read! Right now, it's basically an ENM/CMNM story with slight BDSM themes; as the story progresses I might bring in other stuff. I'd love...

So now that I’ve broken the 10k viewers mark and made it to chapter 8 of the story (chapter 16 if you wanna count additional stuff from myself and another author) I was curious as to what you all thought of it so far. Any suggestions? Comments? Anything you’d like to see in particular...

Hey guys, this is a thread to post feedback and suggestions about my thread on the story Affection Multiplier, currently active and periodically updated from time to time. Here's the link to the start of that thread. Aviel Mandebaum - An Israeli War veteran moving to Liberia (Ebanu8) [Rewrite]...

I am summarizing feature requests/suggestions/feedback that have been conveyed to me. "Mark all as Unread" button, for rereading Edit and delete comments (some people say they won't write comments because being unable to fix the spelling errors is driving them crazy. Others want to remove...

Hello, I don't usually do this but I really want to work on improving my story and thought this would best way to get some direct feedback. 'Trapped in a romance novel but I am the villainess!' - https://chyoa.com/story/Trapped-in-a-romance-novel-but-I-am-the-villainess%21.35374 I haven't...

Hello, I don't usually do this but I really want to work on improving my story and thought this would best way to get some direct feedback. 'Trapped in a romance novel but I am the villainess!' - I haven't received much if any feedback on it, Basically, if you're free do you mind telling me...

There is a world far from our own called Tiressea. On this world were five continents: Gothrione, Zatira, Audasia, Miyria, and Garddrhosyn. In this world lived many races with wildly different beliefs and cultures. In this world you either play as a hero or a monster...

First of all, if you're reading this, thanks for giving my story a chance! I have been pretty consistent with the style of my not so many stories. They usually feature tons of non-con and females being grouped. This particular story I have some ideas about expanding it further and further and...

Hi all. This is the feedback thread for my science fiction story, Intelligence is Artificial. You can read it here: https://chyoa.com/story/Intelligence-is-Artificial.32271 The story concerns Garth Weyland, still a virgin at 20, but having been dumped by his girlfriend Garth decided to...

Hello everyone. This is the feedback thread for my fantasy story, A Demon's Revenge. To begin, you can read it here: https://chyoa.com/story/A-Demon%27s-Revenge.32255 A little bit about the story; It is a fantasy story set in a world with demons, monsters and magic. The principle characters...

Hi, all, this is the story feedback thread for My Wife, His Girlfriend which you can read here: https://chyoa.com/story/My-Wife%2C-His-Girlfriend.32252 I'd like to hear what you all think of it. Any general thoughts, ideas on how it could be improved or suggestions of where you want the story...

Hi there ya'll! This is my first I've written in quite some time, and I wanted to see if there's anyone that would help me out by reading it and giving feedback; https://chyoa.com/story/Goblin-Village.25766 This story is an RPG, so I'm also on the lookout if somebody knows of any good puzzle...

Hello writers and everyone in the CHYOA community! Over the last few months, I've been slowly chipping away at my largest story to date, Futa Island, which as of writing this is up to 233 chapters and has one completed ending (second coming soon). The layout of this story is modeled after...