A Special Hell

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by brevdravis, Aug 2, 2018.

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What would you like to see when the main path is finished?

Poll closed Sep 11, 2018.
  1. More Alternate Sex Scenes.

    1 vote(s)
    10.0%
  2. Supernatural Elements introduced.

    4 vote(s)
    40.0%
  3. Alternate Endings/More Gamefication of the Story

    4 vote(s)
    40.0%
  4. More Male Characters

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  5. More Female Characters

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  6. Brenda Path (Female MC. Will involve a lot of Copypasta, and adjustment.)

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  7. More Sexting.

    1 vote(s)
    10.0%
  8. Random Control Poll Choice: Incest. (I dunno, I write in Brent's Kid sister or something...)

    4 vote(s)
    40.0%
  9. No idea, Surprise me! I prefer the tension!

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
Multiple votes are allowed.
  1. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    Ok, so, No spoilers, but I've got the supernatural elements worked out, and I'm LOVING this.
    Going to be a GREAT second ending, at least as far as sheer FUN to write.
     
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  2. chris_brown

    chris_brown Really Experienced

    Glad to hear it let me know when that chapter's up
     
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  3. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    Well, I have begun weaving the hints since the first sentence. Nothing explicit, but I HOPE that when we get to the supernatural ending (Mega-Happy ending, 4 sex scenes planned, and there's potential for more once the other endings are done) people look at it and go, OH THAT'S what that meant!

    It was one that was in the back of my head for a long time. Of course, there's two more supernatural endings my brain wants to create, but before I get around to that, I'm going to give my readers what has been requested.
     
  4. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    Ok, Closing the Poll. Seems pretty clear to me that people want:

    1.Supernatural
    2.Incest
    3. More endings.

    So you are getting them! Going to add a new poll so folks can chime in with more stuff!

    Edit: As soon as I can figure out how to delete the current votes, or save them that is. :)
    Edit on edit:

    So, posted all 5 currently worked out endings.
    As of right now, I already have 3 more options available for endings if people have another ending they want to see.

    Currently the available choices that I haven't worked out plots for are:

    Take Kaila and Charlotte
    Take Helen and Kaila
    Take Helen and Charlotte
     
    Last edited: Sep 11, 2018
  5. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    OK, I know I'm going off the rails a bit with the Mega-Happy Ending, and I honestly was a little worried about it. I think people can see where this is going, but I have to admit I think it's rather fun.
    I'll provide spoilers only through PM on this one.

    I just figured that I wanted to have FUN, and write the story I wanted to read. I like hidden meanings, impossible puzzles, and people who are way too smart for their own good.
     
  6. brevdravis

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  7. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    For those who are interested, The FIRST Ending is complete.
    And I apologize that I couldn't resist making it... this.

     
  8. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    And we're starting the incest path, so a little appropriate music.

     
  9. airwreck

    airwreck Really Experienced

    What's the status of the path? It's been quiet...
     
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  10. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    Unfortunately RL has been kicking my ass recently. Nearly every day my writing time has been interrupted recently, and it's all stuff that really can't be ignored. When I can get back into the headspace, I'll be writing again, but for right now, I'm a bit on the back burner. Hope it's sooner rather than later.
     
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  11. airwreck

    airwreck Really Experienced

    I completely understand and sympathize.
     
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  12. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Yeah, this is just a hobby, take care of what you have to take care of first man.
     
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  13. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    A Special Hell is back, and the Charlotte Path is getting a post a day. Have written ahead a bit so things are going pretty well. Glad I took the time to let this mull, because the plot adjustments made in the time seem to be helping a bit, at least from the author's perspective.

     
  14. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    So, finally got around to adding an actual synopsis to this story. I'm awful at tagging, but the least I can do if people are going to read this thing is provide an accurate description. (At 161 Threads until the first completed ending, it's a BIG commitment in time, so, folks should probably know what they're getting themselves into.)
     
  15. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    Ok, back at the story.
    Always wanted to write the scene where Kaila got pregnant the first time, so... it's the one currently being worked on. All my rl stuff is dealt with and I'm trying to write every morning again. Thanks to everybody for your support of this story, and thank you for your incredible patience and understanding.
     
  16. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    Adding in a couple characters, just in case somebody wants to write an alternate scene. Trying to give people options to contribute if they'd like. I know that this story is a bit intimidating with the amount of secrecy I had about it.
     
  17. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    Ok, Completed the Flashback. So if you want to know how Brent and Kaila hooked up the first time, just follow the Memory...

    Looking to add a few more flashbacks and backstories, but the incest ending is absolutely coming first.
     
  18. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    So, We have a new Author on Special Hell...
    For folks who have been clamoring for a few of the off-screen scenes to appear Onscreen.... Silverspecter006 has decided to help me out and write a fun and romantic scene for the story.
    It's a minor POV shift, but totally appropriate for the story being told, since it is a Flashback for two of my favorite characters...

    When Helen Met Charlotte...

    I'm excited as heck for this, and want to thank Silver for her hard work and boundless enthusiasm for the story.
     
  19. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    Coming up on the second ending, so... Poll time!

    Suggestions and feedback go here, the only reason the poll is in a different place is because you can only do one poll a post. ;)
     
  20. brevdravis

    brevdravis Really Really Experienced

    Took WAY too long, but I finished the second ending. Voting for the third is in the general board. :)