Adventurer's Perils

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Regin34, Jul 13, 2019.

  1. Regin34

    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

    Men and ladies, we have reach 500 likes! You guys are great and keept going!
     
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  2. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    Should Bluebelle join the party for a couple days, until she can revert back to normal? Or should the heroines just leave her sleeping in the woods?
     
  3. unisol_gr44

    unisol_gr44 CHYOA Guru

    They lost everything, so a fairy for support might not be the worst idea.
     
  4. Regin34

    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

    Ok, I think it is not bad idea too. I think that after one or two hours, fairy should be able to get back to her normal form, with cheaper cost, than before.
     
  5. Regin34

    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

    Hey Guys, did any of you have talent to paint or know somebody who can do that? I was thinking about adding some pictures to our story, at least to characters cards if it will be possible.
     
  6. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    I don't know anyone, unfortunately.
     
  7. Regin34

    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

    Ok guys, we are in the middle of secend adventure and it will take some time before it will finish, but I want to ask you where should take place next adventure? I was thinking about two options. One, It will be escort of caravan in dangrous lands with wild orcs tribite and journey in more cold lands on the north. Probably it will be more monster sex and fight.
    The secend option, will take place in capital of Laaria, on big tournament, with nobles and spy, politics and lies will be part of dangrous for party.

    Which option sounds better? And please to everyone to say their opinion.
     
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  8. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    I like the cold one. Sexy fur bikinis and snuggling for warmth sounds fun.
     
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  9. unisol_gr44

    unisol_gr44 CHYOA Guru

    I’m for cold too, if there is a totally-not-Vikings clan invovled. :D
     
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  10. Regin34

    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

    Not-vikings clans sounds fine too. With shamans and brave hunters too XD. I was thinking party will escorting merchants caravan to one of dwarf fortress, where dwarf mine realy rare metal. But will be problem because of clans wild men, tribite of orcs and dwarfs are all in dispute and team have to find some way out, to lead caravan.
     
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  11. unisol_gr44

    unisol_gr44 CHYOA Guru

    Sounds good to me :)
     
  12. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    I sure hope our heroines wont get trapped in the snow, and be forced to burn all their clothes for warmth... :p
     
  13. Regin34

    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

    Weak, I have in mind something better ;) As wager to pass from locals, party will have to pass trails, one for body, one for mind, and one for soul.
     
  14. Regin34

    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

    Guys and ladies, today is egzacly month since we started adventure of three girls and one men. We write 153 chapters, 148 readers watching us and we get 821 likes for our work! All in only one month! It is great and I'm realy glad to all of you, for your chapters and ideas by what it was possible to write good, sexy and funny story! Thank you and keep going, for more adventures!
     
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  15. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    In the Lex and Mira story where they are trying to sneak back in without being seen, how would you guys feel about a chapter somewhere down the line where our heroes stumble upon poor Hilda and Salza the dark elf bartender getting all lovey-dovey after hours?
     
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  16. unisol_gr44

    unisol_gr44 CHYOA Guru

    Sounds fun to me :p
     
  17. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    Should Dahlia the fairy come to Lex, Mira, and Hilda's rescue from the bitchy city watchwoman, or should something else happen that will allow them to escape her lusty clutches?
     
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  18. Regin34

    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

    Maybe Dahlia steal clothes of watchwoman?
     
  19. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    Should she just steal her clothes, or put some kind of cute, short term fairy curse on her too?

    Like making the muscular watchwoman too chubby to wear her uniform, or making her clothes too itchy to wear?
     
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  20. Regin34

    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

    I think tied her hand and gaged her should be enough. And maybe risk meeting her comander too.
     
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