Adventurer's Perils

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Regin34, Jul 13, 2019.

  1. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    What sort of effects should Bluebelle's juices have on the three heroines?

    Should it make them more fertile and voluptuous? Lustier and more wanton? Sluttier and more willing to parade their new, curvier bodies around in the buff?
     
  2. Regin34

    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

    I think lustier and more sluttier. The effect should hold for max few hours... And later they all should meet Lex to make for him harem... Well for some time XD Four horny and naked ladies.
     
  3. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    I'd like to find some way to squeeze Jaraka the half-orc into the ongoing stuff with Salza and Hilda. Anyone have some suggestions? Can her author tell me more about the character?

    I like it when bully-types get their (sexy) comeuppance and see the error of their ways.
     
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  4. unisol_gr44

    unisol_gr44 CHYOA Guru

    I’d love to tell you more, but Jaraka was really just a plot-device to humiliate Khala a bit and have some sexy time with her, haven’t really thought much about her personality beyond what we’ve written in the chapters. You can do what you like with her starting from there.

    As for suggestions: Maybe she’ll drunkenly barge in to the private room thinking “private” meant bathroom?
     
  5. AmethystWind

    AmethystWind Virgin

    Hello there! It seems that hopefully I will get involved into the story as well, I was talking with Regin about it a bit and hope that my decisions won't bother anyone and will lead to a lot of creative fun mainly. Ergo, I suppose I should presence what I am up to, I've decided I want to start with Khala and Lex after the fall, a second option to chapter 30 " More dwarf surprises". I want to place them in a labyrinth filled with traps and puzzles, series of bad endings on the way to higher levels of the dungeon where they would be heading in order to reunite with the rest of the party.
     
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  6. unisol_gr44

    unisol_gr44 CHYOA Guru

    That sounds pretty good, looking forward to reading your branch.
     
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  7. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    Anyone have some suggestions for how Dahlia should punish Salza and Hilda?
     
  8. Regin34

    Regin34 CHYOA Guru

    Force them to go naked to city outpost and let guards putting them in stocks?
     
  9. hambo

    hambo Experienced

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  10. unisol_gr44

    unisol_gr44 CHYOA Guru

    Hmmn, I’m not sure that works, alot of stuff happened to Mira and Lex in your branch that didn’t happent in the other one. So, I’m not sure connecting the two like that would work, since you are basically going back in time.
     
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  11. AmethystWind

    AmethystWind Virgin

    I could try to help but first I would need to read how it looks like more precisely. But I can find enough time for that in the weekend so then I will say what I think about it.
     
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  12. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    That makes sense.

    I guess I should change my request to asking if someone would like to help me work on a path where we go back to Mira and the gang while Hilda and Salza are off having their misadventures and then (eventually) have those two paths intersect again.
     
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  13. hambo

    hambo Experienced

    Any thoughts on what should happen to Bluebelle? How do you feel about her having an allergic reaction to the tea (since Khala switched them up) that makes her temporarily grow a penis? I'm usually not wild about women getting dicks, but I thought it could be hot if she gets a temporary one, and all the girls have to fuck her enough to make it go away.
     
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