Elf/Orc love story

Reciter5613

Reciter5613

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I had this idea from a RP of mine. A story of a Orc warrior who is hired as a body guard of a Elven queen. She is like turned on by the big brute and soon it may lead to a secret affair and possibly pregnancy. I'm sure someone can make a wild story with that. What do you think?
 
I hope he's better looking than one of Peter Jackson's orcs! Not sure what the baby would look like, either.
 
Lol could be an interesting story. Throw in an Elven prince seeking her hand to give a rough love triangle. Jealousy on the Orc's side as their affair is hidden and this other man openly courts her. Racial tension as the prince sees this bodyguard as lower than the elves. Could be fun to see come together. Considering how Elves are generally long lived, you could play with the idea that part of the reason the queen keeps everything secret is because she knows she will outlive the Orc. I can bounce around ideas for a subject like this all day.
 
FallenSaint said:
Lol could be an interesting story. Throw in an Elven prince seeking her hand to give a rough love triangle. Jealousy on the Orc's side as their affair is hidden and this other man openly courts her. Racial tension as the prince sees this bodyguard as lower than the elves. Could be fun to see come together. Considering how Elves are generally long lived, you could play with the idea that part of the reason the queen keeps everything secret is because she knows she will outlive the Orc. I can bounce around ideas for a subject like this all day.
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Those are nice ideas. Hopefully someone will take this idea and make a actual story in this site.
 
Lol I actually wouldn't mind giving it a try, but I'm really short on free time right now. I haven't even been able to update my own stories lately. If I had help maybe then lol. I can come up with a lot of story ideas for something like this.
 
FallenSaint said:
Lol I actually wouldn't mind giving it a try, but I'm really short on free time right now. I haven't even been able to update my own stories lately. If I had help maybe then lol. I can come up with a lot of story ideas for something like this.
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That's fine. Good things take time and I know RL can get in the way sometimes.
 
Lol I've been giving this story a lot of thought. I'm really interested in trying this. I'm thinking of starting this sunday if I get the chance.
 
Alright I've started the story so hopefully it will be up for your viewing pleasure soon. Introduced five characters by name: Ethimilee the elven queen, Broden the Orc mercenary, Rienlest an Elven prince from another country, and Ethimilee's twin daughters Lethila and Mitri. Ethimilee is a widow, and Rienlest is after her hand in marriage, but of course this story is about her and Broden.
 
FallenSaint said:
Alright I've started the story so hopefully it will be up for your viewing pleasure soon. Introduced five characters by name: Ethimilee the elven queen, Broden the Orc mercenary, Rienlest an Elven prince from another country, and Ethimilee's twin daughters Lethila and Mitri. Ethimilee is a widow, and Rienlest is after her hand in marriage, but of course this story is about her and Broden.
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I love it already. It sounds just as I imagined it.
 
If you would like to know the things I have planned I can start a private conversation. I've been giving this story a lot of thought but until this morning I didn't have enough time to hammer out the opening.

I will give some details of the opening here though:

Humans have come from the south to attack the Elves. Ethimilee's forces have grown soft on a long lasting peace and were unprepared for the attack. Ethimilee brings as many of her forces to bare that she can and makes a stand at a fortress in the path of the Human march. Everything goes well until humans build siege weapons and destroy a wall. Broden personally saves the queen while his mercenary group supports the soldiers and together they push the enemy back. After that Broden proves himself to be a good strategist as well as warrior and manages to secure a contract with the Elven Queen. A month passes and he is the head of her personal guard. His men have done wonders among the troops and now he is in the capital with the Queen. Meeting her two daughters (Ages not given for them yet but they are both over fifty. For elves that is still young but old enough to consent....) This is where they also meet Rienlest. Rienlest has been after the queen since her husband passed away and now he sees his chance. She is in desperate need of help and he wants to use his father's troops and resources as leverage.

The Queen has already noticed her attraction starting to grow towards Broden and knows what Rienlest wants and she wants to try and avoid a situation with either of them. For now her country comes first. But how long will that last?

Please feel free to give me any thoughts you have on that and I hope the actual thread is up soon for your viewing pleasure. I'll get a writer info thread up soon as well as character info.
 
FallenSaint said:
If you would like to know the things I have planned I can start a private conversation. I've been giving this story a lot of thought but until this morning I didn't have enough time to hammer out the opening.

I will give some details of the opening here though:

Humans have come from the south to attack the Elves. Ethimilee's forces have grown soft on a long lasting peace and were unprepared for the attack. Ethimilee brings as many of her forces to bare that she can and makes a stand at a fortress in the path of the Human march. Everything goes well until humans build siege weapons and destroy a wall. Broden personally saves the queen while his mercenary group supports the soldiers and together they push the enemy back. After that Broden proves himself to be a good strategist as well as warrior and manages to secure a contract with the Elven Queen. A month passes and he is the head of her personal guard. His men have done wonders among the troops and now he is in the capital with the Queen. Meeting her two daughters (Ages not given for them yet but they are both over fifty. For elves that is still young but old enough to consent....) This is where they also meet Rienlest. Rienlest has been after the queen since her husband passed away and now he sees his chance. She is in desperate need of help and he wants to use his father's troops and resources as leverage.

The Queen has already noticed her attraction starting to grow towards Broden and knows what Rienlest wants and she wants to try and avoid a situation with either of them. For now her country comes first. But how long will that last?

Please feel free to give me any thoughts you have on that and I hope the actual thread is up soon for your viewing pleasure. I'll get a writer info thread up soon as well as character info.
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To be honest, I didn't expect you to type so much. I'm not a heavy reader. But it seems great so far.
 
Lol sorry I was trying to get the story set up. Not all my posts are so long but I didn't want to do the story injustice by leaving things hanging in the opening. Got character thread up and writer info up. I'll try to get more going on it soon, but probably going to jump over to Power play or Shadow Hunters tonight and hit this story again tomorrow morning.
 
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