I recommend "Darkest Challenges" by insertnamehere. Nice lad in the forums, has some updates every now and then, but every scenario has its consequences, as well as losing pieces of equipment from the start.
I second Becoming a Warrior! Highly involved, very interconnected with game elements, but has a great upbeat, funny writing style throughout it.
Another good one that is ongoing with a very passionate writer behind it is The Erotic Combat League, good if you like sex-fighting stuff. The fights have some nice saucy stuff throughout! https://chyoa.com/story/The-Erotic-Combat-League.16514/map.
I also have a number of them in my signature, if you're interested. Right now, I'd recommend the Goodbye Girls, as all but two of the endings have been finished for it, it's very close to complete!