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pistachios

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Hi all,

I'm new here--just signed up a few days ago. The interactive feature of this site is pretty cool, and I've decided to jump right into writing stories on the site.

The issue is I don't have a lot of ideas at the moment. So, I'm opening myself up to suggestions.

I'm pretty open to whatever, as long as it's not rape or extremely violent. Normal, fetish, whatever, I don't care. If an idea seems interesting, I'll start a story for it. I hope when I check back on this thread I can see some ideas.

Thanks in advance and looking forward to reading and writing on the site.
 
As I said, I'm open to whatever. If someone suggests a fetish and a scenario I think is interesting, I might just write it. But I just started a new story anyway. It's going to have a little bit of everything, I think--some mind control, bdsm scenarios, shaving, maybe milking...whatever strikes my fancy.
 
I always wanted to read a "limited" mind control story. I want protagonists to have limited uses per day or always get some unwanted side effects or effects vanish when he is X meters away or something else

In other words I want mind control with challenge because I kinda like "screw someone's mind" stories but complete power are boring for me because they lack the feeling of challenge
 
I agree with Hvast. There are plenty of mind control stories where the protagonist has UNLIMITED POWER which makes sense as for some people that is what they want to fantasize about, but a story where they have limitations and need use their powers in a smart way would be nice change.

This one: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.169698 "Cursed to Corrupt" is a bit like that with the added reality warping. The main character is forced to use the power on people or the demon (that provides the power) will instead change her and more often than not the demon does some unexpected changes instead of the intended results.

Something similar with mind control could make a fun story, MC isn't in perfect control of his/her power and a "kiss and make up" comment to friends who are arguing is obeyed a bit more literally than intended or perhaps their power starts working when they are daydreaming about a coworker and suddenly creates a spontaneous orgy at the office. The only thing I'm a bit cautious is the repercussions from MC finding out the limits. Like ordering people to do something outrageous and discovering they can only control one or two people at a time or otherwise having the former victims break free is likely to end up badly so this should be handled before they've done anything serious. Perhaps the user manual to their hypno-gun (or whatever) explains the limits so that they know what to watch out for.
 
I'd really appreciate it if you were to create a story like the orgasm gun and make it more lengthy than the current one, as nobody can add to the original and I think the author is pretty much done with it
 
master2018 said:
I'd really appreciate it if you were to create a story like the orgasm gun and make it more lengthy than the current one, as nobody can add to the original and I think the author is pretty much done with it
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Sentinel is still around fairly regularly, so I don't see why you can't add to Orgasm Gun.
 
If inspiration strikes, I'll add to the orgasm gun story. Any more suggestions? I don't mind adding to other people's story threads like Master2018 had suggested.
 
pistachios said:
If inspiration strikes, I'll add to the orgasm gun story. Any more suggestions? I don't mind adding to other people's story threads like Master2018 had suggested.
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You could always just go through the list of Top Stories. Most of them are "Moderated" which means you can add as you please. You could always speak to Duskford, the owner of "At The Cabin", because his story is growing exponentially. It's also a great story, too! He's a pretty cool dude and would be glad to have you along.

I am also looking for people to add to "Senior Year" if they want to.
 
If you want to learn how to write a basic choose your own adventure story, I suggest just getting a pen and paper and mapping it out. The one thing I have learned is what is fun to write isn't usually fun to read. Make a plan with all the branches laid out (or most of them). To start just make a silly story about a guy and a girl going at it and add lots of options too it. A lot of readers here seem interested in getting quickly into the good stuff, often writers want to understandable write. Do what you want but remember the golden rule of web design. If it is more than 3 clicks deep, you lost the user/reader. It is the crux of the problem that sex isn't a story it is a part of one. So making a whole story about just one part means most are self limiting, only so many ways to fuck. Most of all though forget everything I said and just have a bit of fun.
 
Nemeses said:
personally i feel there's a lack of corruption stories, but that's just because i'm a major corruption fetishist (hence the corruption story i'm writing)
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Well, there are all the stories related to Lilith Strain and then there's Cursed to corrupt and the Demonic idol. ...Those are the ones I can think of outright, but there's room for more. ;)
 
I'd appreciate any help, contribution, idesa, thoughts, re-wording of chapters in any of my stories to be honest for the Jessica's Choices series.

It might be worth having a look in story feedback? There are a few of us looking for contributors
 
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