LoversOfLewdness
Virgin
Hello, everybody.
I feel a bit weird doing this, but I've really been into writing my own stories lately. I've started posting on CHYOA myself, and I have to admit I'm quite fond of it! Really enjoyed writing my second story so far on here, but I wanted to see if there would be any feedback. It's a simple concept where a man goes into a dreamworld after having an accident and gets involved in a bunch of smutty adventures. A collection of fanfiction, essentially - since I have quite a few ideas but didn't want to create a completely new page for every single one of them.
Stories so far:
Archer - multiple short stories based around a new agent arriving to ISIS.
A post-apocalyptic world - could be different fandoms.
I'll link it below!
https://chyoa.com/story/Sweet-Dreams.33226
Now, any feedback is welcome. English isn't my native language so feel free to point out any major errors, or just if/how you enjoy the story yourself. I don't work with a lot of conditions for this story but there are a few so if there's any feedback on those, it's very welcome too! Probably going to work on something that utilizes the feature of variables and stuff as it seems like it could be really interesting to write out some kind of game, but anyhow.
Thanks in advance, and I hope you have a wonderful day.
Side note: I always end up writing a lot of group sex in my stories for some reason. I like it that way!
I feel a bit weird doing this, but I've really been into writing my own stories lately. I've started posting on CHYOA myself, and I have to admit I'm quite fond of it! Really enjoyed writing my second story so far on here, but I wanted to see if there would be any feedback. It's a simple concept where a man goes into a dreamworld after having an accident and gets involved in a bunch of smutty adventures. A collection of fanfiction, essentially - since I have quite a few ideas but didn't want to create a completely new page for every single one of them.
Stories so far:
Archer - multiple short stories based around a new agent arriving to ISIS.
- A stealth mission with Lana Kane.
- The Archer brothers visit Lana's parents...
- Pam and Cheryl shenanigans!
- (Coming soon: Katya's DP origin story!)
A post-apocalyptic world - could be different fandoms.
- The Walking Dead: Carl is on the run with his parents...
- (Might be adding more soon, also probably will write something based around Z-Nation!)
- The owner of a bar, and the 'Rust Knight'... - Elizabeth x Meliodas
- The women in my life... - story about a man that catches his daughter and girlfriend one day, changing his complete life for the better.
I'll link it below!
https://chyoa.com/story/Sweet-Dreams.33226
Now, any feedback is welcome. English isn't my native language so feel free to point out any major errors, or just if/how you enjoy the story yourself. I don't work with a lot of conditions for this story but there are a few so if there's any feedback on those, it's very welcome too! Probably going to work on something that utilizes the feature of variables and stuff as it seems like it could be really interesting to write out some kind of game, but anyhow.
Thanks in advance, and I hope you have a wonderful day.
Side note: I always end up writing a lot of group sex in my stories for some reason. I like it that way!
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