I did have an idea at one point that was similar to this. Where an inquisition led by a zealous catholic-like church invades the kingdom. The high inquisitor who's a nun/priestess claims the kingdom has deteriorated do to the noble's debauchery and must therefore be cleansed. In the process she would find out that Marcus is a virgin and would then lock him in chastity in order to maintain his "purity" ultimately bringing him back with her to her home abbey. There he would be told that pleasureing her sisters is a form of prayer to their god/goddess. And would start a life devoted to fuflling all of there wildest fantasies. I had originally thought it would be more of a chastity/religious fetish route, and I didn't bother bringing it up because I figured those weren't really liked all that much, but I think it could work well as a kind of mixed bag fetish route too.
Too many good ideas in this thread! I just want to add them all! Funny enough I actually already have a similar idea I was debating whether it would work or not, where an archangel would come grab Marcus as a response to some sin committed by his parents, probably Anabelle's incestual desires. She was also going to value his innocence and purity and seek to preserve them through strict chastity/orgasm denial. I know that isn't something everyone likes on this site as I've had comments to that effect, but I really like writing it. I just find the idea really hot and I haven't explored it as much as I would have liked in the current threads apart from Irena's, which hasn't quite taken off in that direction yet but will soon. I thought of it as a kind of parallel to your idea with the succubus, but I just wasn't sure what exactly the angel would do to him or where she'd take him. This approach probably works a lot better by removing the unnecessary supernatural elements which I didn't quite know what to do with. I'll think about it, but now I also really want to add this one.
I'm taking this comment as confirmation that Angel's exist in this world and now I really want Irena to have a pet angel boy in a giant bird cage, or merboys in a koi pond. Now I just want exotic pet boys in general regardless of how reasonable it might be in universe. On a more serious note yeah people seem to get pretty uncomfortable around the idea of chastity; which is a shame because I think the dynamic between the caged and key holder can be one of the hottest out there.
I find that kinks which people are very adamant about not liking also have a number of people that absolutely love and will flock to it. If its something you'd enjoy writing I say go for it. On that note honestly one of my favorite branches in this story was one I was very unsure I'd like going into it, so maybe you'll convert some people.
Yay for 1000 favorites! I'm so glad people like this story as much as I enjoy writing it. I keep coming up with more ideas for new routes though. Would there be any interest in a thread where Marcus is with another femboy who's much more dominant? I was thinking he could be another prince or noble, and he could be kind of a foil to Marcus where he's trying his hardest to be fierce and respected despite his girly appearance and so initially he really looks down on Marcus who he thinks is everything he doesn't want to be. Then over time it turns out he secretly loves dressing in girly clothes and being pretty, and eventually he starts to let Marcus past his defenses and they get closer, maybe leading to a point where Marcus is in fact the more dominant one when they're in bed together. I just think it could turn into a sweet story, and even though I don't usually write dominant femboys it might be fun to try!
I'd certainly be all for this idea. More of Marcus is always welcome and I think a dominant femboy route might be a nice way to explore his character. Marcus is always going on about how he hates how weak a girly he is; so maybe seeing someone else like him trying their best might spurn in his own growth, and make him realize he can't blame everything on his body.
Oh for sure I am interested in this, how could I say no to more cute boys . And I agree with Gwixl its a new perspective to look at Marcus from. Also congrats on reaching another milestone
Oh also I sort of mentioned something similar in your comments section but on Irena's path, I know the focus of the story is Marcus but do you plan to show off (some) what happens to Castor, I think a big thing I have liked on that path is that for better or worse his father is very much a hero figure for Marcus and Marcus's reactions to his father being brought low are interesting to me. edit: also omg I keep mixing up Castor and Castus ahhhh
Yeah I was thinking both boys could kind of help each other in a way, as Marcus learns that even with the way he looks he doesn't have to be so weak and submissive to everyone and in turn the other prince could see that he can sometimes allow himself to show vulnerability and it doesn't mean he's instantly going to be disrespected and mocked. Oh yes, definitely. Marcus is going to see a lot of Castor's training first-hand. Irena's already figured out that they're each other's big weaknesses and she's prepared to use that to get what she wants out of them. Plus, I just want to write some pony training so I kind of have to have Marcus there to see it. He should also be showing up soon in one of the other routes.
Could see this as a part of the Coraline route, fits the theme of feminization. As Marcus is allowed more freedoms and able to act more independent of Coraline as the threat to his life isn't as immediate, a walkabout in town doing chores or buying groceries allows for some opportunities for him to encounter someone who hasn't yet discovered that side of themselves yet but is still intrigued by Marcus. Or maybe already is a crossdresser. The femboy can perhaps already tell that he's a boy, or discover it through some series of events. If he's a good girl, Marcus might tell Coraline about the encounter. From something vague like saying he 'made a friend' to spilling everything, or keeping it not as much a secret, but simply not going out of his way to mention it. Even if it may start out with some teasing to outright bullying, to keep with the initial interactions of the original suggested princelings, they become close and support each other, with Marcus becoming more outgoing and confident in his Marcia persona through their interactions. Marcus and Caroline may have to also deal with the added complication of the femboy knowing his true identity. Could have some interesting ripple effects through his relationship with Castus and Coraline.
Thanks for this idea! Yes, having feminised Marcus accidently meet a crossdressing friend who's must better at it than he is could be fun. Seem to be lots of feminine boys running around in this story all of a sudden, I wonder why I'll have a think about how I can fit it into the route with the plan I currently have. I might do a branch of that thread where that happens so it doesn't take too much focus away from the main trio of Marcus, Castus and Coraline who my current ideas are all based around.
Men can often rock a dress as well as women can. Maybe they were always there and we just haven't noticed until now. So it's important that they continue to be found and then can be dominated by women looking for a cute boytoy to relieve her sexual urges, when not pleasing each other.
Coraline seems to relish the situation she is putting Marcus through at times, perhaps she has prior experience, maybe she once had to deal with a friend/neighbors son at one point and transformed them Coraline could bring them in as a role model or teacher for Marcus Whether they wear a dress or not submissive men are great hopefully none go unnoticed
So what's the planed chapter order you're sticking to? I had this impression that you're going to expand each branch to chapter 32, but today you released chapter 33 for first branch, even though monster girl branch and maledom branch are nowhere near chapter 32 yet.
I just go through them in a rotation, starting from the top and adding a chapter to each in turn going down the list. The bottom three (slave-training, monstergirl and maledom) were added later so they're shorter atm. I like all the routes and so I don't want to just focus on one for ages like it would take to get them all back up to the same length. Plus they all have their separate fans who like seeing them updated more often.
spectacular writing on your part. I enjoyed the more gentler paths greatly. I did skim some of the harsher ones and i do like that things never seem to go completly horrible and that there i some compassion even with the cruelest doms In terms of paths i feel you are very well covered already. If i had to come up with something..... Marcus is dropped into a labyrinth full of deathly traps, only these traps are less deathly and more sexual. Can Marcus escape with his virginity intact? (The answer is no)
I've now read the Lyra and Kihara storylines up to their current state and all I can say is you must be Louise Fletcher IRL, cause you, Cai, win!!
Thank you, glad you're enjoying the story! Those are two of my own favorite routes to write in so I'm happy you liked them so much as well!
Been reading your story for a while man, love the plot lines with Kihara and the Orc Warlord. Hope to see more Orc goodness.
Thanks a lot! Glad to hear you enjoy the story! There should be more of both those branches coming soon!
