Marcie finally gets to use her favorite insult. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Primeval-Lusts,-by-JerkGently.1133849
I feel I should add that I did write a sharkgirl chapter into LLNO just for Gambio, but it occurs that they'll probably never stumble upon it in their regular reading because of the choices involved to get there.
If you ever manage to make it through and review the longest branch of LLNO, I'll write an entire ten-chapter story just with lesbian shark girls.
I should have expected this answer lol Very confident I see, but yeah I don't see that happening without cheating
Warning, unhealthy amounts of dick sucking incoming https://chyoa.com/chapter/The-Steward,-by-wilparu.1137063
Kind of want to write a branch now about the health defects of excessive cock-sucking. I might save that one for when, in the far distant future, I finally start Bad Sex.
from https://chyoa.com/chapter/Monster-Girl-Harem,-by-noodles22.1022706 It's just one of those little things I've seized on.
Great review, accurately pointing out my shameful inability to proofread worth a damn and also how vanilla my sex scenes are... and unfortunately how non-sexy some may find them. I'll write something that Marcie and Gina find arousing yet, just you wait! But thank you for liking the world building. It's a real treat for you to take the time to read our stories and give feedback, truly. I'd pay people to read my stories and tell me they liked them haha. (please don't start charging us for the privilege Gina)
I think my most fucked up and dislikeable protagonist needs an intervention in her fucked up and dislikeable life. If you fancy taking a swing at A Bitter Princess, I'd be honoured xx https://chyoa.com/story/A-Bitter-Princess.32892
So a story about STD's? That sounds pretty horrifying. Ha! As much as Gina and Marcie entertain the idea, I just can't condone taking money for Marcie and Gina reads. It would make it less....genuine I guess? The two had many dislikable protagonists so far, so lets see how this one stacks up lol Oh and on the whole Shark thing. Yes, Gina likes Sharks. And no, it is nothing sexual you perverts.
There is literally a guy in this thread writing sharkgirl porn for Gina! Gotta nip this in the bud. Gina's a sweet innocent girl with absolutely no sexual deviancies.
