Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

And that was the 1000th post in this thread!

 

Hah! Now Marcie is even more pissed that she missed that.

 

I had to research female anatomy for that one

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Gina-gets-bothered-with-this-stupid-shit-again.1310092

 

Oh goody, I get to break out the links to reference material.

 

And the response: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Sam-(♀)-a...&-Gina-read-"Bad-Sex"-by-Zeebop-Again.1310163

 

Hi Gambio,

Are you still doing this?

I'd like to present I reincarnated as a Homunculus in a steampunk world with famous 19th century characters but everyone is gender-swapped.

The title pretty much gives the basic premise away. It features Arsene Lupin, Captain Nemo, Dr. Frankenstein, Dorian Gray and Van Helsing. Wonder what Marcie and Gina's thoughts on this are. I'm still on the common route. Don't worry, there are no dickgirls in this story.

 

ok

 

Hello! First time askint for criticism, but could Marcie and Gina review Rogue? My story from last year?

I temporarily lost the will to continue the story when the computer with all my thoughts and planning got stolen. I'm starting to get the urge to write more into it, but I feel it needs another pair of eyes.

 

Sure, gotta need a link for it though.

 

https://chyoa.com/story/Rogue.45476

 

Got it, added it to the backlog

 

Holy cow that title is long enough that it needs two lines

https://chyoa.com/chapter/I-reincarnated-as-a-Homunculus-in-a-steampunk-world-with-famous-19th-century-characters-but-everyone-is-gender-swapped,-by-Alibara.1322640

 

You and your shark girls.

 

Marcie would take offense on that

 

Can I get some critiquing for my Amy Best thread in Great Conspiracy? I'm feeling a little blasé about it, and I think I know why, but I'd like the ladies opinions.

 

Uh, I remember reading some stuff from this story. Don't think I ever did your branch tough.

Sure, put you in the backlog. Get ready for more bitching by Gina that you didn't request the pirate story

 

Dwarf sex is surprisingly underrepresented

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Rogue,-by-Grayice.1326038

 

I really should do another Masochist Mode review, but all the stories left are like a hundred not-fucking chapters deep. And the reviewers almost never reciprocate.

 

I thought about doing MM reviews, but my stories are extremely niche so no one would recognize my characters, and I found it hard to find a new angle that wasn't already covered in Gambio's review. *shrug*

 

I guarantee you:
1) no one cares if they don't recognize the characters
2) using the characters gives them more recognition
3) there are LOTS of branches Gambio hasn't reviewed yet, both in Bad Sex and LLNO. Hell, I don't think anyone has reviewed the Darkest Timeline branch yet. Granted, that requires making a few odd choices to get to.