Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. RejectTed

    RejectTed Really Experienced

    I'd like to add Bondage in Space to masochist mode. And I think I forgot to add Cozy and Kinky, so could you include that too, please.

    Edit: that's any chapter I've added to Bondage in Space.
     
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  2. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Got it, put the two in
     
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  3. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

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  4. Wrynn

    Wrynn Virgin

    And gives you longer to enjoy a nice slice of life harem story.
     
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  5. sierrawritessmut

    sierrawritessmut Virgin CHYOA Backer

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  6. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    That's definitely too. Previously I binge read the stories in two days, so I had four for the review proper. Now I stretch that out to six, which gives the longer stories some more time to be properly digested.

    That sounds like incest-Gina's favorite! ;P

    No problem, put you in the backlog
     
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  10. Gambio

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  11. Wrynn

    Wrynn Virgin

    I hope you at least enjoyed reading it, even if Marcie and Gina didn't. And even some praise from Marcie on the flashbacks. Almost as high a honor as making Gina throw up rainbows.
     
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  12. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    It is extremely hard to get Marcie to praise a flashback, so yeah good job on that part XD
     
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  15. lady-lux

    lady-lux Really Experienced

    I'd like to put up my segment from Solo Erotic Roleplay Journaling and see what happens to it! It starts from here.

    Any path through it should lead to an ending of some kind. The only choice I'll point out is one where you choose whether to "turn left" or "turn right" - "left" is currently a little shorter and a fairly straight line to the end, while "right" has a few more choices, characters, and possible endings.
     
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  16. Gambio

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    Hmm, Dnd with a female character and no immediate Gina flags, maybe that could be one of the rare stories both of them end up enjoying.

    ...probably not.

    Put you in the backlog
     
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  17. lady-lux

    lady-lux Really Experienced

    Great, thank you! :)
     
  18. Gambio

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  19. sierrawritessmut

    sierrawritessmut Virgin CHYOA Backer

    very fair, thorough, and funny review!

    thanks for your time and attention, i’ll see about adding some romantic femdom ;)
     
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  20. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Glad to hear it! Incest stories from a female POV are quite rare, so there's definitely a niche there.