Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

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  6. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Word count would be more accurate, but it's too much of a hassle, so I just go with 10 chapter minimum, 50 chapter maximum instead.

    If a story is below ten chapters but finished, the girls will usually make an exception and review it. That said, 3k is definitely too little for a review.
    (As a reference, the story currently in the queue has entire chapters that are 10k+)

    I think around 10k is a decent minimum word count to be elligible for a review.
     
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  11. Kazza

    Kazza Experienced

    I would love to hear Marcie and Gina's thoughts on a new story of mine, Maidenhead Academy, if they have any openings (pardon the innuendo). Their sense of humor is right up my alley (pardon again).

    Here's the story if I may slide it into the queue (okay, this one was intentional): https://chyoa.com/story/★MAIDENHEAD-ACADEMY★.74072
     
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  12. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Hah, you can never go wrong with puns when it comes to Marcie.
    Unfortunately you can go very wrong with dicks when it comes to Gina, so it cancels each other out

    Put you in the backdoor, eh, backlog.
     
  13. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

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  16. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Added a new rule to cover my bases:

    AI generated stories will NOT be reviewed.(AI generated images are ok) Don't try to pull a fast one on the girls. They will know and have ties to the mafia.
     
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  17. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Good rule. If someone can't be bothered to write it, why expect someone else to read it?
     
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  18. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Yeah, that's my view on things as well. If it's clearly declared to be AI written, then fine. I'm using AI pictures in my stories, so I can't throw too many stones, but I'm definitely not wasting my time on reading it.
     
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