Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Gambio

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  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

  3. Gambio

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  4. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    As a heads up, I will no longer do segments on Cursed Punishment, or really anything that involves Gina and Marcie.

    I'm tired of this.
     
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  5. Hvast

    Hvast Really Really Experienced

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  6. Gambio

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    gotcha , added you
     
  7. Zeebop

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  8. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    good job of keeping an arc up until the end. I always struggle with this.
     
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  9. Gambio

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  10. saktongmanyak

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  11. Gambio

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    Sure, added you. Definitely need to work on that constructive criticism though. That goes totally against everything this stands for!
     
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  12. Hvast

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    Gambio liked your chapter Introduction.

    It is happening!
     
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  13. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    backlog is pretty low after all, so yeah I get to new submissions fairly quickly ;P
     
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  14. Warden-Yarn15

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    How much do you get these slow days?

    Or rather, how much did you get those days where the backlog's long and takes months to finish?
     
  15. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Right now its about one submission per week, but it fluctuates very heavily. I ran out of backlog before and then it shot up to 10 lol
     
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    Aroband Virgin

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  19. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    to be fair, this is also my fault, because I seemingly am incapable of checking how deep a story is


    Ha! Marcie and Gina love these. Added you.
     
  20. Hvast

    Hvast Really Really Experienced

    Story doesn't need to be finished but it should have at least 10 chapters.

    Having at least 10 chapters is not the same as being 10 chapters deep. So, I blame the unclear rules:rolleyes:
     
    Last edited: Dec 11, 2021