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  • raziel83
    There is a manga where a rookie adventurer is attacked by succubi and he panics and uses "beast taming" skill on them. And it sorta works.
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    MissNix
    What's the naame of the manga?
    raziel83
    raziel83
    "Succubus Tamer no Isekai Musou" so it is a bit on the nose as is the trend nowadays.

    (for some reason, while replies on profile can be long, the original post I had to shorten a few times to make it fit.)
    raziel83
    Hm... I wonder what type of stories could be made in Starcraft setting. Other than "Zerg infests Terran (gone sexual!)"
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    raziel83
    raziel83
    Issues that can be easily solved by using "porn-logic"
    Why would Protoss or Zerg even be able to fuck humans? Because it's porn.
    Issues that need actual justification within story:
    Sharp claws on Zerg and those huge nails on Protoss. These will cause complications until a human partner complains and demands to do a pedicure for safer fingering.
    merkros
    merkros
    Protoss as a race has never been prolific to the point where the Xel'Naga had to give them technology to increase their population growth
    Perhaps some protoss splinter group discover that Terran/Protoss hybrids reproduce more quickly "the old way" than whatever way protoss/protoss reproduce
    Zerg sex would be harder since Zerg are scary and full of teethCould be a long con or something to do with primal zerg
    raziel83
    raziel83
    Zerg related stories would probably be mainly about non-con and mind control. Perhaps with Zergs "infesting" Terrans in a more sexual manner, or straight up monster-fucking with the Zerg as the monster.
    raziel83
    A story seemed interesting but described a 35yo as old and greying. This makes me feel ancient and reminds me that some writers are young.
    raziel83
    Hmmm... A story about a young dragon starting to gather their hoard of treasure and virgin sacrifices? Possibly monster minions too.
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    Remin
    Remin
    We are talking about all cute virgins~
    But to be honest I find the idea of dragon using magic to transform all their victims into cute, young virgins, very hot.
    Wanna stay male? Better put up a good fight and you just might be allowed to pick, heheheh!~
    raziel83
    raziel83
    I remembered that there was some porn game about a dragon defiling/devouring a countryside. Defiler Wings, it is called. Unfortunately it seems the English translation of the game stopped at some point and newest version is either Russian or (very badly) machine translated.
    raziel83
    raziel83
    I think my main issue with determining the character is that I don't like "hub" stories. I would like a story to focus on one or just few main characters and to have an actual concept that you start from. So if I do this, I'd like to first decide on what type of dragon the story is about and then let things branch off on their "adventure."
    raziel83
    Is there an "You are now an evil genius" type of story yet on CHYOA? I have an idea or two for such.
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    raziel83
    ...went from "every arrogant tech bro is talking about them" to "oh look, it's worthless" so quickly. Have the villain harp on and on about how much they accomplished ina short time and then use these goods to start designing and building a mind control device to start their harem of mind slaves and worker drones.
    TheLowKing
    TheLowKing
    Ah, yes, if that's your goal, then someone who's very obviously a scammer probably works better than someone who's merely debatably one.
    I like what you're setting up here! Someone who insists they're doing Good, but who in reality is only after fulfilling their own twisted fantasies. Throw in a bit of unreliable narration and you're off to the races.
    raziel83
    raziel83
    The idea was to go for the humour / mind control themes and have a young main character (insufferable teen genious type) who starts to build their criminal empire. Maybe some mishaps with mind control chemicals or devices, maybe have some fun with how the MC converts the women he lusted for into his sex slaves but then he is the one who is inexperienced and doesn't know what to actually do other than imitate porn.
    raziel83
    My chapters are getting a good (for me) amount of likes and I still have more ideas. ...But not much time.
    raziel83
    Occasionally writers refer to breasts as "gravity defying." I need a scifi story to mention someone using anti-grav module just for that.
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    Impregmaniac
    I've just had the worst mental image. A woman with breasts that defy gravity too much and she ends up floating away by her chest.
    raziel83
    raziel83
    Hmmmm... A Dominatrix themed SCIFI villain with anti-grav holding up her enormous breasts. Good guy defeats her by hacking the anti-grav modules and making her float up to the ceiling.
    raziel83
    raziel83
    ...Or if she is a psyker/Sith Lady, she was using force/psychics to keep her breasts perky, and when she is too tired from fighting, the breasts start to sag. Also, one of the less used reasons for how someone manages to fight in high-heels is "she is using the force" to do so.
    raziel83
    Waiting for a few chapters to pass review. Also stuck on an idea that I can't quite figure out.
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    raziel83
    raziel83
    Wanted to do a bit of gradual and slow corruption on a character who was turned into an incubus. Trying to figure out the best way for it. As in, what limits would they set for themselves and how their corruptor would make the cross the limits, one by one.
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    Impregmaniac
    Interesting.

    If I may, I suggest thinking in terms of "Do the Ends justify the Means?" or "Picking the lesser of Two Evils".
    raziel83
    raziel83
    Well, at least the main advantage in CHYOA is that when I'm stuck on one idea, I can write something else.
    raziel83
    The risk of getting caught makes a story really hot. But porn films that do this are more of comedic "are they blind?" type... Funny though.
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    raziel83
    raziel83
    I mean, people have some fetishes that just can't be done IRL in any safe (or ethical) way but can be explored through stories or roleplay without any harm for example. Cheating and incest for example.
    AlexandraS90
    AlexandraS90
    I like that one where Daisy Taylor's mother's got dementia and she has sex in front of her on Thanksgiving with that guy.
    raziel83
    raziel83
    Sometimes I want to watch a funny porn vid so I don't completely oppose the less plausible or less serious vids. But I have trouble finding porn that would take this particular idea and go the serious route (possibly because it is a bit darker one.) Maybe those are behind a paywall.
    raziel83
    If I wasn't doing this for free, I would be more conflicted when something I wrote on whim gets more likes than the stuff I really enjoy.
    raziel83
    Welp, I wrote a lot today. Now lets see if the chapters go through review and if I can finish the remaining ideas I have.
    raziel83
    I *was* going to finish and publish another page tonight. Then I spilled my drink on my laptop. Welp.
    raziel83
    Trying to make yet another comeback. Maybe I'll make more than one thread this time. :)
    TheDespaxas
    TheDespaxas
    you don't need tons of threads , sometimes just a very good one is sufficient.
    good luck, good writing.
    raziel83
    raziel83
    Let's be honest here. Quality is beyond my means. Quantity at least is achievable.
    raziel83
    Hm... Both a story (which I had added to recently) and the creater appear to be gone. That's a pity.
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    Cr4ck
    Cr4ck
    The same author also published a story called "Futa Contagion" less then 7 hours ago and already deleted it :/ Unfortunate indeed
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    chris_brown
    i know,hes shown up here on different IDs only to delete them a short time later,ive told him his writing is good,but he seems as if hes afraid of any criticism or critique of his work
    LizardGod
    LizardGod
    well he seems to be back again.
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    raziel83
    I have an idea for a story. Rather dark one to be honest. But I'm not sure how to write it or where the publish it even.
    raziel83
    Trying to write again after a long break but I keep getting stuck for one reason or another.
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    chris_brown
    if ure having writers block,maybe i can help
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