raziel83

What's the naame of the manga?

"Succubus Tamer no Isekai Musou" so it is a bit on the nose as is the trend nowadays.

(for some reason, while replies on profile can be long, the original post I had to shorten a few times to make it fit.)

Issues that can be easily solved by using "porn-logic"
Why would Protoss or Zerg even be able to fuck humans? Because it's porn.
Issues that need actual justification within story:
Sharp claws on Zerg and those huge nails on Protoss. These will cause complications until a human partner complains and demands to do a pedicure for safer fingering.

Protoss as a race has never been prolific to the point where the Xel'Naga had to give them technology to increase their population growth
Perhaps some protoss splinter group discover that Terran/Protoss hybrids reproduce more quickly "the old way" than whatever way protoss/protoss reproduce
Zerg sex would be harder since Zerg are scary and full of teethCould be a long con or something to do with primal zerg

Zerg related stories would probably be mainly about non-con and mind control. Perhaps with Zergs "infesting" Terrans in a more sexual manner, or straight up monster-fucking with the Zerg as the monster.

Must be all that student debt, I dunno. I am not an american xd

We are talking about all cute virgins~
But to be honest I find the idea of dragon using magic to transform all their victims into cute, young virgins, very hot.
Wanna stay male? Better put up a good fight and you just might be allowed to pick, heheheh!~

I remembered that there was some porn game about a dragon defiling/devouring a countryside. Defiler Wings, it is called. Unfortunately it seems the English translation of the game stopped at some point and newest version is either Russian or (very badly) machine translated.

I think my main issue with determining the character is that I don't like "hub" stories. I would like a story to focus on one or just few main characters and to have an actual concept that you start from. So if I do this, I'd like to first decide on what type of dragon the story is about and then let things branch off on their "adventure."

...went from "every arrogant tech bro is talking about them" to "oh look, it's worthless" so quickly. Have the villain harp on and on about how much they accomplished ina short time and then use these goods to start designing and building a mind control device to start their harem of mind slaves and worker drones.

Ah, yes, if that's your goal, then someone who's very obviously a scammer probably works better than someone who's merely debatably one.
I like what you're setting up here! Someone who insists they're doing Good, but who in reality is only after fulfilling their own twisted fantasies. Throw in a bit of unreliable narration and you're off to the races.

The idea was to go for the humour / mind control themes and have a young main character (insufferable teen genious type) who starts to build their criminal empire. Maybe some mishaps with mind control chemicals or devices, maybe have some fun with how the MC converts the women he lusted for into his sex slaves but then he is the one who is inexperienced and doesn't know what to actually do other than imitate porn.

I've just had the worst mental image. A woman with breasts that defy gravity too much and she ends up floating away by her chest.

Hmmmm... A Dominatrix themed SCIFI villain with anti-grav holding up her enormous breasts. Good guy defeats her by hacking the anti-grav modules and making her float up to the ceiling.

...Or if she is a psyker/Sith Lady, she was using force/psychics to keep her breasts perky, and when she is too tired from fighting, the breasts start to sag. Also, one of the less used reasons for how someone manages to fight in high-heels is "she is using the force" to do so.

Wanted to do a bit of gradual and slow corruption on a character who was turned into an incubus. Trying to figure out the best way for it. As in, what limits would they set for themselves and how their corruptor would make the cross the limits, one by one.

Interesting.

If I may, I suggest thinking in terms of "Do the Ends justify the Means?" or "Picking the lesser of Two Evils".

Well, at least the main advantage in CHYOA is that when I'm stuck on one idea, I can write something else.

I mean, people have some fetishes that just can't be done IRL in any safe (or ethical) way but can be explored through stories or roleplay without any harm for example. Cheating and incest for example.

I like that one where Daisy Taylor's mother's got dementia and she has sex in front of her on Thanksgiving with that guy.

Sometimes I want to watch a funny porn vid so I don't completely oppose the less plausible or less serious vids. But I have trouble finding porn that would take this particular idea and go the serious route (possibly because it is a bit darker one.) Maybe those are behind a paywall.

Point was that if this was a paying job, I'd be tempted to "follow the money" and ruin my artistic whatchamacallit. Now it doesn't really matter much.

Yeah, some chapters just take off and it's like "Guess I'm writing this kink now."

Can confirm, readers are super weird sometimes!

If only we could find some way to grind up that feeling into a fine powder and sell it on the back market. We'd make a fortune!

Any recovered chapters from the laptop spill?

Yeah, I wasn't typing when the spill happened so everything unfinished was saved as a draft.

you don't need tons of threads , sometimes just a very good one is sufficient.
good luck, good writing.

Let's be honest here. Quality is beyond my means. Quantity at least is achievable.

The same author also published a story called "Futa Contagion" less then 7 hours ago and already deleted it :/ Unfortunate indeed

i know,hes shown up here on different IDs only to delete them a short time later,ive told him his writing is good,but he seems as if hes afraid of any criticism or critique of his work

well he seems to be back again.

Send me a pm and I can assist unless someone has already helped you

Let it simmer, figure out what's wrong and how to fix it.

well "dark" can mean a lot of things. Would be curious to know what makes it so dark

if ure having writers block,maybe i can help