Bad Sex Development Thread

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Zeebop, Aug 26, 2022.

  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [6/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [18/27] - In Progress

    18/27 storylines complete.
    28/40 chapters complete.
    11/40 chapters published.

    Latest chapters: Light's Out, Tons of Fun

    Moving right along. Another week or so and the writing should be done.
     
  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [7/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [18/27] - In Progress

    18/27 storylines complete.
    29/40 chapters complete.
    13/40 chapters published.

    Latest chapters: Find A Fold And Fuck It, Smash Or Be Smashed

    Didn't get all my writing done today, but that's why I built up a cushion. Still doing pretty good so far.
     
  3. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [7/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [20/27] - In Progress

    20/27 storylines complete.
    31/40 chapters complete.
    15/40 chapters published.

    Latest chapters: Give Her A Hand, Woman Seeking Man

    For anyone curious, the three primary choices are:

    Man Seeking Woman
    Woman Seeking Man
    Woman Seeking Woman

    These are far from the only possibilities, but I'm keeping the story focused in these initial 40 chapters.
     
    Last edited: Sep 10, 2022
  4. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Only one chapter written tonight. Tired, but still well on schedule.

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [7/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [21/27] - In Progress

    21/27 storylines complete.
    32/40 chapters complete.
    17/40 chapters published.

    Latest chapters: A DILF, Plastic Wrap.

    Favorite line of the story so far, according to you the viewers:
     
  5. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [8/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [22/27] - In Progress

    22/27 storylines complete.
    34/40 chapters complete.
    19/40 chapters published.

    Latest chapters: Anal, A Lemon
     
  6. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [8/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [24/27] - In Progress

    24/27 storylines complete.
    36/40 chapters complete.
    21/40 chapters published.

    Latest chapters: A Micropenis, Premature Ejaculator

    When I finish all the chapters, does anyone care if I post them all at once, or just a couple a day to drag out the anticipation?
     
  7. TheLowKing

    TheLowKing Really Really Experienced

    I would definitely drag it out.
     
  8. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [9/9] - Complete
    Chapter 3s: [25/27] - In Progress

    25/27 storylines complete.
    38/40 chapters complete.
    23/40 chapters published.

    Latest chapters: Anal Retentive Asshole, Crybaby

    Almost there, folks!
     
  9. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [9/9] - Complete
    Chapter 3s: [27/27] - Complete

    27/27 storylines complete.
    40/40 chapters complete.
    25/40 chapters published.

    Latest chapters: Damaged Goods, Three--But There Are Other Issues

    That's it, all the writing is done. 15 chapters left to post, so that's like 3 chapters a day for 5 days or 5 chapters a day for 3 days. Anyone have a preference?
     
  10. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Got bored, posted all the remaining chapters!

    That's it, that's the story. For now.

    As with a lot of terrible ideas, the original plan shifted a bit during execution. I'm not unhappy with how it turned out, but I think there's definitely room for expansion and improvement. I had a bunch of ideas that I didn't pursue for various reasons (what if Sam's mother/bully/boss answered? What if their sex date was sick with common cold/lice/HIV? What if two people showed up? What if it was a virgin?) - but the nice thing about the format is that it's easily expandable. I didn't do any Man Seeking Man, Transwoman Seeking Man, etc. but you could easily add that in there.

    One thing I tried not to do was revisit the same issues. So, for example, the Fat Partner option appears in only one branch. I could easily write a fat lesbian branch, or a woman with a fat man, but I felt like that would be excessive. But room for future expansion.

    I also debated how to make it go deeper - Second Date, maybe - but I don't know if there's much to add there.

    Anyway, 27 storylines in 40 short chapters. All done.
     
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  11. Cuchuilain

    Cuchuilain Guest

    I knew a fellow once who had a foreskin that was too tight such that his masturbation had to be done with great care. Anyway on his first actual sex encounter the thing ripped during proceedings effectively circumsizing him.
    Not sure if you need any ideas...
     
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  12. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

  13. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    A while back on the Bad Halloween Story Ideas thread I'd mentioned Monstr - a monster dating app - and I have half an itch to maybe play with that story. Debating whether it would work better as new chapters on Bad Sex or a separate story with a similar short premise.
     
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  14. Alibara

    Alibara Really Experienced

    Have you done one where the penis was too big?
     
  15. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Yes, the DILF threads. There's also an oversized-strapon chapter.
     
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  16. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Thinking I might expand this story - by adding either more options or a "Second Date" scenario. Maybe this summer.
     
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  17. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I'm thinking that around October I should either do a similar follow-up to Bad Sex or a new story with the same basic framework called Good Sex.

    Granted, my other 2023 New CHYOA project is still on hold because Life Happened (TM), so this might just be shooting for the moon.
     
  18. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Instead of continuing Bad Sex, I'm wondering if for September 2023 I might do a counterpart to this called Good Sex, where people make an emotionally fulfilling connection and boink pleasantly in different ways.
     
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  19. huginn

    huginn Really Experienced

    That sounds far more interesting to me than Bad Sex.
     
  20. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I have an outline ready for Good Sex. Not sure I'm going to bother with a separate development thread. Similar concept, but a different approach.
     
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