Bad Sex Development Thread

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Zeebop, Aug 26, 2022.

  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [2/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [5/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [15/27] - In Progress

    15/27 storylines complete.
    23/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    The old laptop is dead, all hail the new laptop! No promises that this translates into faster writing, but it may help.
     
  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [2/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [6/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [15/27] - In Progress

    15/27 storylines complete.
    24/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  3. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [2/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [6/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [16/27] - In Progress

    16/27 storylines complete.
    25/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    Slow but steady progress.
     
  4. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [2/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [6/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [17/27] - In Progress

    17/27 storylines complete.
    26/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  5. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [2/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [6/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [18/27] - In Progress

    18/27 storylines complete.
    27/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    About 2/3 done. Just been a very busy year, 2023.
     
  6. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [6/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [18/27] - In Progress

    18/27 storylines complete.
    28/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    Going to finish this.
     
  7. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [7/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [19/27] - In Progress

    19/27 storylines complete.
    30/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  8. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [7/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [20/27] - In Progress

    20/27 storylines complete.
    31/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  9. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [7/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [21/27] - In Progress

    21/27 storylines complete.
    32/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    So much more difficult to write happy sex.
     
  10. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [8/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [21/27] - In Progress

    21/27 storylines complete.
    33/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  11. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [8/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [24/27] - In Progress

    24/27 storylines complete.
    36/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  12. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [9/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [26/27] - In Progress

    26/27 storylines complete.
    39/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    Submitted the first chapter for review. Once that's approved, all start posting the rest, maybe 3 a day.
     
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  13. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [3/3] - Complete
    Chapter 2s: [9/9] - Complete
    Chapter 3s: [27/27] - Complete

    27/27 storylines complete.
    40/40 chapters complete.
    4/40 chapters published.

    Okay, finally live! Introductory chapter is here: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.1517012

    Going to publish 3 chapters a day. Could do more, could do less, but they're all written, so.
     
  14. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    8/40 chapters published

    Looked at the format and realized 4 chapters at a time makes sense. So now we have one complete branch with all three endings. Some of these are a bit saccharine...don't worry, they get worse. Sweet enough to trigger diabetes in the lot of you.
     
  15. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    12/40 chapters published

    Nothing too kinky. Practically vanilla.
     
  16. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    16/40 chapters published

    Okay, that's half the straight chapters up - and only a couple of impregnation kink chapters!
     
  17. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    20/40 chapters published

    Halfway there. It's always weird to go back and read chapters written weeks or months ago. What was I thinking!?
     
  18. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    24/40 chapters published.

    Not all of these chapters are created equal, despite my best efforts.
     
  19. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    28/40 chapters published.

    Okay, that's all the heterosexual chapters. All the rest involve lesbians. I always seem to strain with lesbian sex chapters.
     
  20. TheLowKing

    TheLowKing Really Really Experienced

    Interesting! Do you know why?