Bad Sex Development Thread

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Zeebop, Aug 26, 2022.

  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Started in writing Good Sex. Like with its counterpart Bad Sex, I'm going to do most of the writing before I post anything, just so that I have a good lead and can publish content regular, probably starting in September.

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [0/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [0/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [0/27] - In Progress

    0/27 storylines complete.
    1/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [1/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [0/27] - In Progress

    0/27 storylines complete.
    3/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  3. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [1/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [1/27] - In Progress

    1/27 storylines complete.
    4/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    Writing is going slow. Real life and all that. This is why I like to get the writing done first, then post.
     
  4. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [1/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [2/27] - In Progress

    2/27 storylines complete.
    5/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    It's much more difficult to write happy sex and healthy relationships when you feel like crap.
     
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  5. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [1/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [3/27] - In Progress

    3/27 storylines complete.
    6/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    Slow going, so I think I'm going to finish writing the whole thing before I try and post any of it.
     
  6. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [2/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [3/27] - In Progress

    3/27 storylines complete.
    7/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  7. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [2/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [4/27] - In Progress

    4/27 storylines complete.
    8/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    These are going to be less funny/outrageous than Bad Sex, if only because I haven't figured out how to do properly funny/outrageous and lovey-dovey/romantic/sex positive.
     
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  8. TheLowKing

    TheLowKing Really Really Experienced

    Hmm, 'outrageous funny' would be hard, but 'cute funny' should definitely be doable!
     
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  9. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [2/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [5/27] - In Progress

    5/27 storylines complete.
    9/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  10. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [2/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [6/27] - In Progress

    6/27 storylines complete.
    10/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    I'm still updating this day-by-day because it helps me keep focused on finishing it. Which is good, because my general enthusiasm for life is in the shitter.
     
  11. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [3/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [6/27] - In Progress

    6/27 storylines complete.
    11/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  12. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [3/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [7/27] - In Progress

    7/27 storylines complete.
    12/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    I feel I'm repeating myself a bit much here. Will have to try and get more creative about things going forward.
     
  13. TheLowKing

    TheLowKing Really Really Experienced

    All happy families are alike; each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.
     
  14. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [3/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [8/27] - In Progress

    8/27 storylines complete.
    13/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    In this case, it's more like "Okay, not every chapter can end in impregnation."
     
  15. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [1/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [3/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [9/27] - In Progress

    9/27 storylines complete.
    14/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    One full third of the branches! It's really hard to write sweet sex.
     
  16. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [2/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [4/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [9/27] - In Progress

    9/27 storylines complete.
    16/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    Going to try and finish this thing this month, if I can.
     
  17. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [2/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [4/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [10/27] - In Progress

    10/27 storylines complete.
    17/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  18. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [2/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [4/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [12/27] - In Progress

    12/27 storylines complete.
    19/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.
     
  19. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [2/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [5/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [13/27] - In Progress

    13/27 storylines complete.
    21/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    Over halfway. This last chapter is a little saccharine. But that is the idea.
     
  20. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Introduction: [1/1] - Complete
    Chapter 1s: [2/3] - In Progress
    Chapter 2s: [5/9] - In Progress
    Chapter 3s: [14/27] - In Progress

    14/27 storylines complete.
    22/40 chapters complete.
    0/40 chapters published.

    Some of these chapters are longer than others. I don't have a set length, it's just sometimes the scene seems to work and gets away from me, while others are more intense but shorter. I try to keep them from getting perfunctory, but some just definitely get more into it than others.