Nemo of Utopia
CHYOA Guru
OK: Reading what I missed went a lot faster than expected:
Bastardlydastard:
1A: I am not familiar with Skinwalkers: are they like junior grade Werewolves? (A Link to the race page on the SRD is requested.)
1B: I also am slightly worried by Damar's apparent status as 'token evil teammate' or am I reading the character wrong?
Moonblack:
2: Syleen seems OK, but I will warn you that I have been told by an IRL lesbian that I can't write lesbian sex scenes convincingly.
Majus:
3: Nalana Yinrie looks mostly good as well, and I am glad you decided to embrace the possibilities of the campaign by taking Sex Appeal and so on, however I note she is still not finished.
GenericEditor168:
4a: Your alignment of "Lawful/Chaotic" is not in keeping with this game's focus on simplicity: While in many of my games it would be perfectly acceptable with the addition of a 'Neutral' at the end in this one we only allow for the Law-Neutral-Chaos and Good-Neutral-Evil axies.
4b: I see Sslvark has good taste in Liqueurs, I am partial to Applejack myself.
4c: Your character seems good to go otherwise: I like the backstory.
Everyone:
5: HP is max per level +/- CON.
6: With a plurality of players who have expressed interest ready (or almost ready) I am now aiming for a first post for the main game of Tuesday or Wednesday.
7: Please be reminded that I will not be updating the main game as often as I have this character creation phase: I am planing to go slowly with it so as to hopefully avoid burning out on it. Updates may be less than weekly: I implore everyone to not deluge the thread with responses/OoC Chatter/dialogue between updates, as this has led to burn out in the past.
8: I will be less available after 7:00 Tonight until 01:00 Tuesday: use the help files on the SRD where you can: I will TRY to drop in for quick updates to clarify remaining questions on my brand new phone between times IF POSSIBLE...
Bastardlydastard:
1A: I am not familiar with Skinwalkers: are they like junior grade Werewolves? (A Link to the race page on the SRD is requested.)
1B: I also am slightly worried by Damar's apparent status as 'token evil teammate' or am I reading the character wrong?
Moonblack:
2: Syleen seems OK, but I will warn you that I have been told by an IRL lesbian that I can't write lesbian sex scenes convincingly.
Majus:
3: Nalana Yinrie looks mostly good as well, and I am glad you decided to embrace the possibilities of the campaign by taking Sex Appeal and so on, however I note she is still not finished.
GenericEditor168:
4a: Your alignment of "Lawful/Chaotic" is not in keeping with this game's focus on simplicity: While in many of my games it would be perfectly acceptable with the addition of a 'Neutral' at the end in this one we only allow for the Law-Neutral-Chaos and Good-Neutral-Evil axies.
4b: I see Sslvark has good taste in Liqueurs, I am partial to Applejack myself.
4c: Your character seems good to go otherwise: I like the backstory.
Everyone:
5: HP is max per level +/- CON.
6: With a plurality of players who have expressed interest ready (or almost ready) I am now aiming for a first post for the main game of Tuesday or Wednesday.
7: Please be reminded that I will not be updating the main game as often as I have this character creation phase: I am planing to go slowly with it so as to hopefully avoid burning out on it. Updates may be less than weekly: I implore everyone to not deluge the thread with responses/OoC Chatter/dialogue between updates, as this has led to burn out in the past.
8: I will be less available after 7:00 Tonight until 01:00 Tuesday: use the help files on the SRD where you can: I will TRY to drop in for quick updates to clarify remaining questions on my brand new phone between times IF POSSIBLE...