Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Oh believe me, there are SO many more dickgirls. Writing actual lesbian branches is hard as hell; I think almost every one that gets to chapter 20 has a cock appear at some point.
     
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  2. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  3. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    I'm not entirely sure how to comment on stories that show up on Marcie and Gina when I do in fact actually dislike the story in question. There are... So many stories on here that just do lack even a basic level of quality, but it feels mean to say so especially since I'm not being asked to review the story in question I'm simply reading a review written by someone else.
     
  4. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Yeah, that's understandable. I have an easier time mocking something I think is actually good as well


    I always wondered if authors who apply would like to get reviews from multiple people and even considered opening it up, so that everyone could write a review on a featured story, as long as Marcie and Gina get first "dips"

    But that might be pushing it a bit too far.
     
  5. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I mean, I'd be fine with it for Lois Lane's Night Out, but other folks might not like to engage Dogpile Mode.
     
  6. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    I know for a fact if the floodgates opened on some of these I'd probably end up with a reputation for cruelty pretty quickly. Not sure if that's a good idea. I would personally though be open to the idea... Definitely seems like something that should be added as an option rather than a part of the basic package.
     
  7. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Yeah, if anything it would be an opt in option. No idea how much interest there even would be from the reviewers side of things, so for now i just leave it at an idea.
     
  8. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  9. Gambio

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  10. Gambio

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  11. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Poor Awesome Joke...
     
  12. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  13. Haoro

    Haoro Really Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

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  14. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    There was one typo in 135 chapters. This author is a bloody machine I tell you.
     
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  15. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

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  16. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    I may have had a bit of a ramble in the comments on this one...
     
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  17. BBBlooster

    BBBlooster Experienced

    Well this is all just fucking fantastic, holy shit.

    Read a good bit into your thread in Cursed Punishments already, and i plan on binging it more tonight. Marcie and Gina are both amazing!
    If you’d like to take the time for them to review it. I’d gladly hurl myself and my story onto the chopping block.
    https://chyoa.com/story/Naive-And-Erotic-Roommates.26064
    Male MC, dogshit grammar and spelling, bad formatting. I might give them an aneurism with this one.
     
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  18. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    Haha, thanks added you.

    No backlog right now, so we will get to you story fairly quickly.

    Also I don't think you have to worry about Grammar. Marcie and Gina have seen some shit, i tell you.
     
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  19. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  20. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Maybe Lois & Blaze should revisit Marcie & Gina... <looks at massive backlog of chapters to write> at some point.