Oof, I can imagine that story was hard to criticize. It's basically perfectly written
Well this is all just fucking fantastic, holy shit.
Read a good bit into your thread in Cursed Punishments already, and i plan on binging it more tonight. Marcie and Gina are both amazing!
If you’d like to take the time for them to review it. I’d gladly hurl myself and my story onto the chopping block.
https://chyoa.com/story/Naive-And-Erotic-Roommates.26064
Male MC, dogshit grammar and spelling, bad formatting. I might give them an aneurism with this one.
Maybe Lois & Blaze should revisit Marcie & Gina... <looks at massive backlog of chapters to write> at some point.“You know this other fuck has written like a five part review on “hard candy” right? And Unkown7 isn't far behind. You think they give a fuck about quality?”