Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  2. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Ha also I've been thinking... I know the stated plan was... revisiting Tower of Voices after Yulia's run was ended one way or the other, but... Do you think it's advanced far enough since then that another read might be in order?
     
  3. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

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  4. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    That was back when I still had one follow up per story. Right now there are definitely enough chapters for a follow up lol

    As in the male and female variant? I mean Marcie and Gina only had exposure to the female one but sure XD
     
  5. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Then I'd definitely be interested in seeing the girl's thoughts on how things have advanced for Yulia since then. As well as more meta commentary on the fact that it's you writing two characters reacting to a story where in you are one of the people that help direct the path the story takes :D
     
  6. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    It's definitely a very uncommon setup lol I don't even know at which chapter the two girls stopped reading
     
  7. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

  8. Cuchuilain

    Cuchuilain Guest

    I think it may break all the rules, but can I please request the girls' ridicule of https://chyoa.com/story/Break-the-4th-wall.29576
    Its a fairly collaborative project with rather a lot of authors and a lot of threads, but not a great deal of depth to any single thread.
    As I cant volunteer others' work, can I put forward the content on the threads on Ria and Aleksandra that I contributed (2.8 and 2.12)?
     
  9. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    Doesn't look like these paths hit the required depth of 10 chapters.

    If a story is actually finished below 10 chapters I tend to let it slide, but like this I have to adhere to the rules.
     
  10. Cuchuilain

    Cuchuilain Guest

    Fair enough, c'est la vie etc. Rules are rules. I'll let my ego carry on inflating then without any verbal pies being thrown at it.
    I suspect even if there are another 40 threads added to this project, it may never get past the 10 chapter limit though.
    Actually its a bit like Marcie & Gina read CHYOA in that regard now that I think of it...
     
  11. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    ha! Crazy enough Marcie and Gina has actually reached over 10 chapters deep, so it would qualify for a review.

    If you finish one of the paths and it's below 10 chapter I can do a segment on it.
     
  12. Cuchuilain

    Cuchuilain Guest

    Actually, I thnk the 2 I mentioned (Ria and Aleksandra) are finished, limited though they are.
    You're right - I see it got to 11 on one path - my mistake!
    It may be worth a look if you have time. If not, I might manage to get this past 10 at some point on another path that someone has recently posted.
     
  13. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Oh ok, if the paths are finished I slot you in
     
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  14. Cuchuilain

    Cuchuilain Guest

    Thanks.
    Just an aside, I always thought your avatar was standing in a boxing stance. I see now (after clicking to zoom in), that it's something altogether more contemplative.
     
  15. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    I can see it.

    But no, Marcie is incapable of boxing.
     
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  16. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

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  17. TheLeherengin

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  18. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    This reminds me of a story I half-wanted to write. A young woman desperate to lose her virginity saves up for a sex worker; you start out the story with X amount of cash, and every option costs a variable amount - you "win" if you manage to orgasm before you run out of money. Except one of the options has her accidentally summoning a succubus, and now the price of actions is parts of her soul...and the succubus wants it all.

    Probably won't get to it, though.
     
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  19. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    That whole souls stuff is always tricky.

    I mean what does giving up your soul even mean? Do you become a empty vessel? Vanish completely? Or hot body control?

    That's important information before one can make a decision!
     
  20. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru