Marcie and Gina read CHYOA
- Thread starter Gambio
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vyksin
Experienced
If they can hold out until at least chapter 82, they might like the turn it takes, by the way.
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
Yeah, the aim is getting to chapter 100 or a good stopping point around there, so that shouldn't be an issue ;P
MichaelChaseLit
Experienced
Hello! Apologies if I’m submitting this wrong, but I do believe I qualify for a review, and would love to toss my story in the ring! It’s called I am NOT a Hero!, and I would be enthralled to see myself thrown into the meat grinder of rudeness from Marcie and Gina. There’s (as of requesting) 44 chapters out. I have a feeling they’ll tear me apart for the intro, as I’ve re-re-re-re-rewritten it at this point and even *I* think it’s lackluster, but apart from that I’m really curious how they’ll destroy me. Sorry for having this be so long, I’m new to forum-ing.
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
Haha, not a problem. We had considerably worse applicants.
Put you in the backlog
Wrynn
Experienced
Would like to submit my branch for Contractually Obligated, Lori a woman at the end of her rope. Not finished, but 17 chapters is enough for a taste I hope. Sorry Gina, no sharks. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lori,-a-woman-at-the-end-of-her-rope.1579339
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
No sharks AND a non centered image in the very first chapter? Somebody's feeling dangerous.
Put you in the backlog ;P
Wrynn
Experienced
I have to give Marcie something to complain about. No collages here.
Zeebop
CHYOA Guru
Starting another Masochist Mode review. I won't do all of it, but I'll get Lois & Blaze up to the break at chapter 96. That seems fair.
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Bl...6-year-old-divorcee"-by-saktongmanyak.1672065
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Bl...6-year-old-divorcee"-by-saktongmanyak.1672065
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
I just checked and the girls made it to chapter 52, which I think was the latest chapter back then. Good to see Sak keeps it up.
Zeebop
CHYOA Guru
Part 2, through chapter 40:
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Bl...ld-divorcee"-by-saktongmanyak,-Part-2.1672666
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Bl...ld-divorcee"-by-saktongmanyak,-Part-2.1672666
Zeebop
CHYOA Guru
Part 3, through chapter 60:
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Bl...ld-divorcee"-by-saktongmanyak,-Part-3.1673177
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Bl...ld-divorcee"-by-saktongmanyak,-Part-3.1673177
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
vyksin
Experienced
I think Gina would dispute that statement.
Thank you again for the fun! I was actually surprised the whole parking garage and hardware store weren't a bit more memorable, but that whole life threatening thing right before probably did overshadow the mood, so I'll look into that.
Fair critiques and enjoyment. Maybe I'll correct things before next time....
Zeebop
CHYOA Guru
Part 4, through chapter 80:
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Bl...ld-divorcee"-by-saktongmanyak,-Part-4.1673640
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Bl...ld-divorcee"-by-saktongmanyak,-Part-4.1673640
Zeebop
CHYOA Guru
Part 5, through chapter 96, and the end of this masochist mode review. Not sure Sak has seen any of these yet, but I do feel I owed them.
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Bl...ld-divorcee"-by-saktongmanyak,-Part-5.1674249
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Lois-&-Bl...ld-divorcee"-by-saktongmanyak,-Part-5.1674249
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
I feel I need to make it a point to really hammer it down for authors to bookmark Marcie and Gina's review if they apply for Masochist Mode because yeah...
I did send him a message about it though
Gambio
CHYOA Guru
Warning: Gina is somewhat displeased with this one
https://chyoa.com/chapter/I-am-NOT-a-Hero!,-by-MichaelChaseLit.1678738
https://chyoa.com/chapter/I-am-NOT-a-Hero!,-by-MichaelChaseLit.1678738
MichaelChaseLit
Experienced
Thank you for taking the time to read my story! I had a lot of fun reading the review!
Amazing choices for music, genuinely laughed at the DK pick.
Also enjoyed the critiques! I’ll go a little more in-depth on the actual chapter replies section.
Once more, thanks!