Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

MichaelChaseLit said:
Thank you for taking the time to read my story! I had a lot of fun reading the review!

Amazing choices for music, genuinely laughed at the DK pick.

Also enjoyed the critiques! I’ll go a little more in-depth on the actual chapter replies section.

Once more, thanks!
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Hah, glad Marcie finally gets some recognition for her BGM picks. This was one of the stories were we had too many songs to choose from, which is always nice

Wrynn said:
I'm guessing there were no sharks?
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Worse, much worse.
 
Anyone else think Gina dreams of herself as Jaws, aiming herself through the water like a sleek missile at a dangling pair of legs that belong to Marcie?
 
I ended up writing a reply chapter. I’ve never done a chapter on someone else’s story before. Do I just upload it and it send it to you for evaluation or something?
 
Goodness, it was over twice as long as my usual chapters lol. I think I may have went overkill with the reasoning to make it plausible in-universe…
 
Zeebop said:
Anyone else think Gina dreams of herself as Jaws, aiming herself through the water like a sleek missile at a dangling pair of legs that belong to Marcie?
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Great, you just gave Gina a new fetish.

If Marcie ends with any bite marks she's gonna sue you for damages.

MichaelChaseLit said:
I ended up writing a reply chapter. I’ve never done a chapter on someone else’s story before. Do I just upload it and it send it to you for evaluation or something?
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Yeah, just add it to the story like a regular chapter. I will have to approve it first, but the system is otherwise identical
 
Very fun. Glad Gina had a fun time with this one and Marcie took the bait, can't wait to see her Halloween costume. Gina can get some enhanced milk to help her fit into it from Malcom at no charge.
 
Wrynn said:
Very fun. Glad Gina had a fun time with this one and Marcie took the bait, can't wait to see her Halloween costume. Gina can get some enhanced milk to help her fit into it from Malcom at no charge.
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I feel like I have to add a disclaimer that this all depends on an ongoing bet, which in turn depends on vyksin demanding a follow up.

Also, you might have awakened a long suppressed fetish within Gina

Which means Marcie will hate you even more.
 
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outa said:
It's been over 3 months, submitting The AI Knows for round 2.
Take whichever branch you prefer.
The girls may be more annoyed with the test option in a good way, more weird stuff happens. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Cerve-asks-you-about-the-test.1602075
If the girls take the test option you can skip from chapter 63 to 103 as it's The Wizard's Guild origin with some minor differences.

https://chyoa.com/story/The-AI-Knows.63559
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Good thinking telling them to skip that part, or you would have had to deal with one hell of a meltdown lol

Put you in the backlog
 
Gambio said:
Good thinking telling them to skip that part, or you would have had to deal with one hell of a meltdown lol

Put you in the backlog
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They're of course perfectly within their rights to have a meltdown over it, just wanted to let you know where to skip to so you don't have to try and figure it out on your own. Looking forward to their opinion on the format of that section.
 
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