My Roommate Is Possessed By A Brain Slug

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Zeebop, Jan 4, 2026.

  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Sorry for the errors lately. Been a very long couple of weeks.
     
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    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Sorry for the delay on today's chapter, I swore I posted it this morning before work, but apparently I did not.
     
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  4. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    It's really weird to consider that aside from the brief dream-sequences, this is probably my most aggressively straightforward and restrained story in terms of focusing on plot, relationships, and normal sex.
     
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  5. huginn

    huginn Really Experienced

    The weirdness is here very much tied to the plot. You have certainly done well keeping the plot moving, not too fast but constantly forward.
     
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