My Roommate Is Possessed By A Brain Slug

[Zeebop]

Sorry for the errors lately. Been a very long couple of weeks.

 

[Zeebop]

For anyone who missed it, review of the first 50 chapters: https://chyoa.com/chapter/My-Roommate-Is-Possessed-By-A-Brain-Slug,-by-Zeebop.1868223

With a reply that reveals some of the secret What Might Have Beens behind MRIPBABS.

 

[Zeebop]

Sorry for the delay on today's chapter, I swore I posted it this morning before work, but apparently I did not.

 

[Zeebop]

It's really weird to consider that aside from the brief dream-sequences, this is probably my most aggressively straightforward and restrained story in terms of focusing on plot, relationships, and normal sex.

 

[huginn]

It's really weird to consider that aside from the brief dream-sequences, this is probably my most aggressively straightforward and restrained story in terms of focusing on plot, relationships, and normal sex.

The weirdness is here very much tied to the plot. You have certainly done well keeping the plot moving, not too fast but constantly forward.

 

[Zeebop]

Sorry for the delay on today's episode, it was not a productive weekend.

 

[Zeebop]

It is kind of nice to write a story where the comments go from lesbian incest anticipation to "I hope Mel gets to explore his feelings of abandonment."

 

[huginn]

It is kind of nice to write a story where the comments go from lesbian incest anticipation to "I hope Mel gets to explore his feelings of abandonment."

As a reader I am certainly not opposed to former, but latter or aomething of the kind keeolps me reading.

 

[Zeebop]

Haven't updated the lore on the front page in a while because a) doesn't seem like anyone cares, b) getting unwieldy, and c) some major spoilers for upcoming chapters added recently.

 

[Zeebop]

Actually finished the writing early today. And now have time to fret about whether it's good enough.

 

[huginn]

Actually finished the writing early today. And now have time to fret about whether it's good enough.

It is good enough. No need to rewrite it three more times.

 

[huginn]

Small typo: Double Jordan in the last sentence: "On the walk home, Jordan locked her arm in his, and Jordan followed behind."

 

[Zeebop]

Small typo: Double Jordan in the last sentence: "On the walk home, Jordan locked her arm in his, and Jordan followed behind."

I can fix that.

 

[Zeebop]

Sorry for the flub-up about the DNA, the original relationship was going to be much weirder and I screwed up thinking about the percentages.

 

[huginn]

I definitely loved how you wrote doubtful Mel in the latest chapter. https://chyoa.com/chapter/No-charge.1882610

 

[Zeebop]

I know some of you were hoping for a more immediate sexual attraction between Mel and his half-sister Molly, but keep in mind it's a slowburn story. Building up to things.

 

[Zeebop]

This was a tough week re: writing, but I managed to keep to the schedule. Still working to expand the outline a bit, so I don't have an absolute limit to the story depth; maybe 200 chapters.

 

[huginn]

This was a tough week re: writing, but I managed to keep to the schedule. Still working to expand the outline a bit, so I don't have an absolute limit to the story depth; maybe 200 chapters.

Yay, we are at half way then. Sounds like there is still a lot to come.

 

[Zeebop]

Hopefully. When it comes to actually writing a chapter, the details tend to shift around a bit.

 

[Zeebop]

Request has been made for an Alien Lore chapter. I'm traveling this weekend and that's going to play merry hell with my writing and posting schedule, but I'll try and put one together.