Sorry for the wait, this past week I was hesitating about which suggestions I should present to you, among all the ideas your story gave me through the months. I finally decided on three of them that I thought would be interesting while not being overly convoluted nor too simple and bland. Here they are, I hope you’ll enjoy them:
The bodyguard (muscle worship route): With the king and queen wanting their son Marcus to be safe, Castor decided, before escaping with his wife during the attack on the kingdom, to task his most formidable warrior to guide him out of the kingdom, to lay low and to protect him, at least until Castor can remedy to the situation. This warrior, however, is the very type of female knight Marcus has been reading stories about: a two-meter-tall, muscled and tomboyish amazon. At first, their both surprised by each other appearance, Marcus by seeing his fetishes in flesh and bones, while she is baffled at the sight of the prince being a contrast of the man she was honor-bound to, his father. Which made her decide to train him while they travel the country, as a wandering knight and Marcus as her young squire, however the weak prince rapidly gets to her nerve, she is used to living with soldiers, therefore his lack of strength and survival skill , as a man, annoys her. But her annoyance would soon blossom into something else. For you see, growing up a lot of men were trying to prove they were stronger than her because she was a woman, putting them back in their place always made her feel great, she attributed this feeling to simple pride. But now, seeing the contrast between herself and the prince give her a massive “high” like she never felt before, now with a need to dominate the young prince, and the prince seeing her as his naughty stories come to life, it’s not hard to see where this will go.(Note: It says “muscle worship”, but the focus is mostly in their differences in builds, you can change it if you want)
The Baroness (Forced marriage route): After the men of Gaius were able to force the king and queen to flee their castle, leaving Marcus alone, a new armed group appear and rapidly and expertly disbands Gaius’ army to themselves flee, the commander behind this counter-attack? A Baroness from Castor’s court, more of a strategist than a warrior, although she can hold her own in with a sword, she quickly worked herself amongst Castor’s most trusted confidant. Her intellect permitting her to come up with some of the most brilliant strategy, be it at chess or in a real war. However, her latest plan was one not even the king knew of, for she had the same intention as Gaius, and although she holds no grudge against the royal family, she has no intention of giving back their kingdom, she intend to make it her own, but that would be easier if she was to marry in royalty. Enter Marcus, the prince that just reached the age for marrying, also her type, she wants to marry him to become the new queen of this kingdom she has been coveting for so long and also put an end to her status as “old maid”. The baroness is maybe very patient but, she still waited for quite a while for Gaius to attack and then take back what she believe was hers to take, and during that time, this cougar also had to lays off on other lavish activities, so the court would thrust her more, and she is starting to run out of restraint in that department too. Fortunately, she intends to have her honeymoon very soon.
The steampunk general (Sex toys route): The heavy sounds of steam and metal echoes in the city, the fight is over, if you can even call it a fight, it was too quick and one-sided to be called that, that’s when the door of Marcus’ room bursts open, opened by the metallic boot of an armor like he’s never seen before, it look more like a golem than an armor, it’s wearer, the general of the vanguard of a country neighboring Castor’s kingdom, now their armies are here and they want to dominate with their new technology. The general of this vanguard, a young woman, as young as a general should be, is taking Marcus prisoner, to interrogate, mostly. Which is perfect for her, her new mission being a very exhausting and stressing one, she now has to interrogate a young, cute male, the methods used in the interrogation are hers to choose. Which means she can test some her “experimental toys” on him and she gets to relax by watching a cute boy squirm in pleasure for her eyes only. That’s like killing three birds with one stone. (note: I did say it’s steampunk, but the level of advancement in that domain would up to you of course, example: do they have steampunk vehicle or are they not there yet.)
Well, those are the three stories idea I present to you, I hope you’ll enjoy them, don’t hesitate to make changes to the suggestions if you want to use them. I decided to at least make a psychological profile of the characters and how I see them, you can bring any change to them you want, as I said. Sorry for lack of detailed physical descriptions for the characters, I felt like it’d make it easier for you to build upon a character the character physique with only the basis rather than making changes. Also, sorry for the lack of names for the characters, and the country in the steampunk route, there’s two reasons for that, one: I suck at giving name. Two: since you’re the one who ultimately add the routes and chapter, I thought it’d be more appropriate if you were the one giving them names.
If you have any criticism, don’t hesitate to tell me, I want to get better at putting my ideas in papers and writing in general. As always keep up the good work.
